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21ST CENTURY RE-WRITE OF HUMPTY DUMPTY

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Humpty Dumpty fell off the top of the wall He got on the phone and gave his lawyer a call With help from the lawyer and litigation men Humpty is rich and won’t have to work again! 09~30~16 Inspired by Three blind mice poem by Ilene Bauer

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Date: 10/6/2016 8:58:00 AM
Such a fun write :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/20/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thanks Jo sorry I have just found your comment:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/3/2016 12:10:00 PM
Hahahah nice one !
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Date: 10/3/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Kyle:-) I keep being challenged to write other parodies of nursery rhymes now :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 7:49:00 PM
you are on a roll these days. I am just sitting on nothing!!
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:05:00 PM
I know that feeling Andrea:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 4:38:00 PM
OMG!!!!but then again at least I know who my taxes are supporting.
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Date: 10/1/2016 4:41:00 PM
:-) thanks for your comment John:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 2:48:00 PM
also a Fav...
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:00:00 PM
aww thanks Armand I thought you were yolking and egging me on then lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 2:46:00 PM
and I thought he was a good egg...I guess the yolks on me...talk about being hard boiled...this really cracks me up...although I feel shell shocked...white as a ghost...I don't want to egg you on but...I've scrambled my comment and that doesn't go over easy...I like to be positive you know sunny side up however if you want to make real mayonnaise you're going to have to crack open some eggs...Omelette that last one pass don't want to get cheesy as a French man let me toast you and bid you adieu.
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:59:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 10:27:00 AM
And up went my insurance premiums. Damn Humpty...
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:56:00 AM
ha ha ha Scott that is also true:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 7:05:00 AM
Jan, Nice poem. Pls tell me how I will be rich like Humpty....ha..ha...ha.....Enjoyed..........//Manmath
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/1/2016 11:56:00 AM
ha ha ha Manmath:-) call injury lawyers for you:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 6:18:00 AM
Was Mr Egghead his lawyer?...nice one Jan...:-)
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:22:00 AM
ha ha ha good one Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 5:15:00 AM
:D But can they put him back together again? Lawyers are good for nothin' really when it comes to surgery.
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Date: 10/1/2016 5:33:00 AM
so true and no amount of money can ever compensate for serious injuries which can be life changing:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 10:27:00 PM
Very good, Jan good luck in the contest :-)
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:08:00 AM
It's just for fun Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 9:05:00 PM
Good re-write, Jan! Gave me a chuckle! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 7:50:00 PM
Very clever Jan, I needed a smile (LMAO) this morning. All the best... /|\
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Rick I was inspired by Ilene Bauer's poem without reading it this would have never been written:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 6:46:00 PM
Absolutely great! I read it to Tim and Kyle who both laughed with me ... CayCay
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:06:00 AM
Aww thanks CayCay - give them my love :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 5:51:00 PM
Lol! Hi Jan, This is funny ,clever and very creative. Well done. llene inspired you to write a good write. A Big seven:-) Alexis PS. I must go find Ilene's poem.
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Date: 9/30/2016 5:54:00 PM
Ilene's brilliant poem inspired me to write this:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 4:34:00 PM
I love this and I know it was inspired by Ilene's poem. You are so creative Jan. I enjoyed the picture too. 7 ;/)
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:39:00 PM
When I read Ilene's poem I wrote a comment about Humpty and litigation and whoosh the idea for the poem was created:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 4:15:00 PM
where there blame there's claim lol
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:27:00 PM
oh so true:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 4:13:00 PM
Clever and funny..and right on...BG
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:27:00 PM
Sadly true these days Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2016 3:44:00 PM
lol...That is the way of the world now Jan. Sue first...
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:50:00 PM
oh so true Tim:-( hugs Jan xx