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I'm young but I remember tryin to strt ballin den my life strted falling but I was den giving free shots to bring my life back up like free throws now I'm tryin to come up off of pain like I'm d rose. Its 2014 this when my life really strt getting important. Now caring more about myself ,feels worth it. That's just to be certain that my future won't be hurting. And skip the adult stage of getting my life nursed. I'm just saying I gotta care about me first. Lately I just been thinking. Dang I ain't no baby nomo. I'm almost grown where I will hav to worry bout my own bills and not bein poor. Cause dats my worst fear. Knowing dat my life cudve been gone put me in my own tears. Thats why I don't want to disappear. Cuz I want to be successful and have a career. No guranteeds but imma try to succeed doin positive things this year.

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Date: 5/7/2016 1:55:00 AM
Demetrius, nice to see this one again. skat
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Date: 1/27/2014 2:25:00 PM
I love your poem, Demetrius, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/27/2014 1:53:00 PM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here.
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Date: 1/27/2014 10:57:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Demetrius- I choose your first : 2014 poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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