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.."?Your Beauty!"..

Blackberry kisses, within the celestial starlit mornings hour....

Stirring these passions aglow, amid the flickering flames of desire ~

Caressing such thoughts of you; smouldering embers, that burnish so very brightly!

These ardent heated emotions; florids, of the blue oranges rising ~ 

Crossing the boundaries of a tomorrows promise....

Once thought to be but only, a forbiddens dream?!

As I now feel your ivory breast, pressing softly to my burning heart

Beating, beneath the magic of your silkened strawberry lips; moist ~ 

Burying this arrow of our light, gently, inside of thee....

To gather your cries, as you reach for the sky

And arch as a bow, your life; pouring its pleasures

Upon this world of my own, soul!

Tasting now your glistening sweetened nectars; ripe

While twirling unto the delight, of such joyous and piercing prose.... 

These mounds of vanillas creams, melting, their flavours into me
Entangled, within this fairy tales maze, of your alluring eyes ~
Which consume my very being, with the breath, of your beautiful gaze!

Intensely dissolving these walls once built; like painted clay, inside of a broken kiln....

This barrier now breached, by your majestically perfect smile ~

To become but a flowing river once more, of glittering and sparkling currents

Beneath your rainbows colours, of everything, that was forever meant to be!?

This tenderness of your touch, as soft as a whitened doves; smooth and subtle....

Quenching my deepest thirst; as you engrave your longing nails

Of rosebud scarlet, into the cores of my no longer bleeding, searching heart! 

Dripping with its desires for you; pulsing and exploding, inside....

Mesmerized, by your presence; and cast, upon the shores of your love ~

As the candle light glows, afore these shadows that dance; their enchanting trance

And the silhouettes sway, beneath their yellowish moon....

Aflame, amid your igniting embrace; while you stroke these fires, that burn 

Yearn, for only you and you alone; your light, and your touch ~

The very essence which breathes this life, your life, profoundly, inside of me!

Within these blackberry kisses; dreams, of a tomorrows horizon

Now thriving, atop the crystals waters, of this sea of love....

Pounding; throbbing; penetrating; tingling; the warmth of your breast, pressed

Eternity, upon the tip of my tongue; your sugar laced taste ~


.."?Your Beauty!"..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 6/4/2017 8:15:00 PM
Love it :)
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:16:00 PM
I feel like I shouldn't be here. This beautiful intimacy is way too personal. No one should gaze. But let me just say the imagery is splendid. May you 2 be happy always. And thank you for your kind words on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:37:00 PM
* ... “Ok *Baby, Tis *Yours” ))) )))
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:18:00 PM
My Darling.. as I Claim this write.. Still as I read I know tis you wrote of me.. as I know deep within my heart still.. I Love You..
Date: 5/1/2011 2:39:00 AM
Perfection !!!! THIS IS JUST SO PURE sarah x
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Date: 12/25/2011 8:54:00 AM
Smile ˜ You Look Beautiful Sarah!:) ˜
Date: 3/21/2011 10:33:00 AM
so like, 7 by 70 times you forgive me too? Just Cindy, few men have called me Lucinda with respect, it was a hang up... just remember the last name, please do not offend me like that, as I have asked the Lord to forgive th relations of humanitarianly bondings, please do respect that. I've never been called Cindy Lu in my life, God bless America today, I pray that we can get it together with compassions and caring, love and caring for YOU, me
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:26:00 AM
vows are vows, which a massive err on my vow to you, in what I would not do, good thing we have a forgiving Christ Jesus! I've got a good grip on a stable foundation, thanks, yet to be honest, writes like this I no longer need the fantasy, as I have went back to my first love. Smile :)
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:26:00 AM
perhaps as the others I couldn't help my self brother in reading, you have an excellence in verse, at times I do not comprehend it all, but all is well with the love of Christ and the holy spirit within me, guiding me.stay sweet.I hope you find a partner in life to share the glory of God with, and my daily deeping of understanding, it is very incredible an annointing receiving such things from our Lord. I ask?given
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:16:00 AM
well, this is packed with a very mansculine verse of a true beauty in your sight and passions, very much imagery, well formed keeps the reader intensified, especially the ladies, and yes, the men as well.... You know I have spoken to you in other ways about this write before days ago. I am not a man. I left W.Va. in tears for having experienced true lust over almost a year ago, half the time I didn't know what he was even doing ...laugh and smile. men will be men, cont.
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:58:00 AM
Overloaded with descriptiveness. Quite a write here.
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:10:00 AM
Passionate writing, john!
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Date: 2/19/2011 2:22:00 PM
sorry john, DG has me blocked for religious reasons.
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:48:00 AM
Love, passion, heart and soul in this wonderfully written piece. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/19/2011 11:09:00 AM
this piece spoke passionatly to me as i though of how i now think of the passing of my love. i think of how it discribers her for me in a way that i can not put into words like you so delicatly did here. for the first time; i sent her to heaven. and i could'nt wait to tell you that you did this amazing thing. and tell you i know what it is to "Yearn, for only you and you alone." i'll have to put this in a place where i can keep it. and perhaps years from now relive thememory and return to heaven
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:48:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hi SweeetHeart!:) *
Date: 2/19/2011 10:20:00 AM
A carnival of foreplay. Yes, the eager, but patient, lover and poet. Enjoyed mucho. Love, Daver
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:19:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Mr John Rhinem. Oh my! blackberry kisses, sweet oh sweet. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:54:00 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ Owwww, I Want To Kissss You * Soooo Very Deeeeply!:) ˜

Date: 1/21/2012 5:50:00 PM
Smile ˜ James * Beautiful James!:) ˜
Date: 2/16/2011 10:17:00 AM
Hey John! Read this one before, it's as moving as ever. You can delete the comments that aren't so nice below...they take away from write. They also create a murky atomosphere. Who needs it...there's enough scarey stuff on the News.:( Keep to you, Mikki
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:46:00 PM
Smile ˜ Sweeet Beautiful Michelle * I'll Always Love You Baby!:) ˜
Date: 2/15/2011 12:33:00 PM
Thank you John for a lovelly valentine wish x and I love the above ...Smiles my friend love sarah x
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:53:00 AM
i remember this beauty John,a treasure of a poem. Thanks for the valentine wishes,hope your day was great.
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:39:00 PM
Smile ˜ Still My Baby!:) *

Date: 12/25/2011 8:57:00 AM
Smile ˜ Thank You Baby * This Was You!:) ˜
Date: 2/14/2011 8:09:00 PM
Wow John an amazing masterpiece. A very happy Valentine to you too. How are you?
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:54:00 PM
Nice John, like always... stopping by to say hi.... and take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:58:00 PM
Smile ˜ There You Are * Look At You * Looking Better Than A Girl Has A Right Too * Smile ˜ I Love You!:) ˜
Date: 2/14/2011 2:55:00 PM
A very Happy Valentine's Day to you too, you, handsome John Rhinem! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2012 6:02:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Could Pass Through This List Of Beautiful Names & Kissss Everyone Of Your Beauties * Love Everyone Of You * Smile, I Love You Baby!:) ˜
Date: 2/14/2011 2:45:00 PM
Hello John, You write so much like Christopher! It is hard to read where one starts and the other stops. My love was a writer/poet and indeed genus in his published and un published works. Your words do inspire and are written with such passion. Thank you for all your kind comments. I love reading your work As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:36:00 PM
Very passionate work..I see that it has drawn many bees to the honey essence of your sugary dripping pen..Sara
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Date: 2/12/2011 1:02:00 PM
My dear John, I am overwhelmed with the beauty of your poem, just beautiful, and even your comments are like poems in themselves, so enchanting~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:15:00 PM
Hmmm! I'd like to see who can beat this!? Awesome dedication to the Lucky girls! Very beautiful and sensuous write, John. Perfect for Valentine's Day! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:41:00 PM
Bless you for giving us so much romance as Valentine's Day approaches, John. May I share this with a friend of mine who is getting ready for her wedding? I know she will love it, just as I do. Your passion shines throughout this write! Love, Carolyn
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