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...Deafening To Us

deafening to us like a tsunami rising cleaving souls, Silence

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Jamecia Buggs

Date: 8/16/2010 7:10:00 PM

Beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 6:47:00 AM

Congratulations Jim on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2010 9:46:00 PM

oooh great contrast for this theme! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/6/2010 9:16:00 AM

Congrats, Jim. Nice going. Ralph

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/6/2010 7:37:00 AM

congrats on your win with this wonderful entry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 4:52:00 PM

Congrats on this well deserved win, Jim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/5/2010 3:13:00 PM

This is a fine piece..congrats on your win.BG

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/5/2010 1:43:00 PM

The most damaging words can sometimes be the ones we don't say...Congrats on your win Jim, nice imagery.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2010 12:43:00 PM

Jim, Congratulations on your win with this profound haiku. Aloha, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 8/5/2010 11:48:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Jim, very powerful the silence in it. Mega congrats with this Gem >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 11:27:00 AM

Congrats Jim on your big win in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku..enjoy your win today with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2010 12:15:00 PM

Interesting Haiku..Good luck in the contest with this Silence write...Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/3/2010 4:16:00 AM

Hmm...you made me wonder what is deafening? could go alot of ways!

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/3/2010 12:37:00 AM

strong haiku, enjoyed reading

Skat A

Date: 8/3/2010 12:36:00 AM

A Very DeeP Image here of suffering. I think enjoyed.~SKAT