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...Deafening To Us

deafening to us
like a tsunami rising
cleaving souls, Silence

Copyright © Jim David | Year Posted 2010

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August 16, 2010 at 7:10 PM

Beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 9, 2010 at 6:47 AM

Congratulations Jim on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2010 at 9:46 PM

oooh great contrast for this theme! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

August 6, 2010 at 9:16 AM

Congrats, Jim. Nice going. Ralph

Francine Roberts

August 6, 2010 at 7:37 AM

congrats on your win with this wonderful entry

August 5, 2010 at 4:52 PM

Congrats on this well deserved win, Jim

Barbara Gorelick

August 5, 2010 at 3:13 PM

This is a fine piece..congrats on your win.BG

Timothy Brumley

August 5, 2010 at 1:43 PM

The most damaging words can sometimes be the ones we don't say...Congrats on your win Jim, nice imagery.

Connie Marcum Wong

August 5, 2010 at 12:43 PM

Jim, Congratulations on your win with this profound haiku. Aloha, Connie

August 5, 2010 at 11:48 AM

Wonderful Haiku Jim, very powerful the silence in it. Mega congrats with this Gem >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 5, 2010 at 11:27 AM

Congrats Jim on your big win in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku..enjoy your win today with luv..

August 4, 2010 at 12:15 PM

Interesting Haiku..Good luck in the contest with this Silence write...Sara

Doris Culverhouse

August 3, 2010 at 4:16 AM

Hmm...you made me wonder what is deafening? could go alot of ways!

Jessica Arteaga

August 3, 2010 at 12:37 AM

strong haiku, enjoyed reading

August 3, 2010 at 12:36 AM

A Very DeeP Image here of suffering. I think enjoyed.~SKAT

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