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There was a woman from Chicago, who loved playing loud music once too often, outside! Her neighbors, no friends, locked her in her brown shed, with no food at all to survive. Poor thing, she passed away, dreaming of her favorite tunes, to her very end. A beautiful funeral procession was held, playing those same tunes they so vehemently condemned. And into heaven' s gate she did glide, where she and her tunes gloriously, to this very day, abide! * This is a rhyming limerick. A, A, B, B, A August 5, 2019 10:00am PST

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Date: 8/6/2019 8:12:00 PM
The irony of this poem amused me, as it is SO truthful and done often!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/7/2019 1:21:00 AM
This limerick is quite esoteric. It runs on two levels PR
Date: 8/6/2019 3:41:00 PM
Poetic justice! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/6/2019 3:44:00 PM
People see this one as they choose.))) Panagiota
Date: 8/5/2019 9:08:00 PM
Wow, what a Limerick. Well penned truth.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/5/2019 9:16:00 PM
Hi ML. Great to see you. Thank you. I think this is my first limerick. Glad it turned out well. I realize how very unusual this one is, or am I wrong? Panagiota XoXo
Date: 8/5/2019 8:32:00 PM
I feel her pain... unless it was disco. Then lock the shed and throw away the key. Have a great day my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/5/2019 9:11:00 PM
David,,thanks for visiting again. Have heard all kinds played there. It is deafening in my experience but liked that way. So be it. I had a relative who played ethnic music to make people deaf. Communities have noise laws. They are quite strict. Nothing moral involved. Normal to me as speeding laws. Panagiota ))
Date: 8/5/2019 12:40:00 PM
You are a rebel, Panagiota! Much enjoyed your "limerick". LOL
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/5/2019 1:05:00 PM
Oh, the biggest trophy ever from you....calling me a rebel. My life is now complete-)) "A follower, I shall never be..... Nor to false prophets bend my knee" Thank you. Got your Soupmail, thanks! Panagiota xxxxxxxxxxx

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