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01.09.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Words in verse and cryptic keys Does an objective truth exist? Poetry is mighty, be my poem Our future will never be written by poets /I will always love you more than life/ A valuable investment is your heart The colorless earth's crust is cold love can develop earthquakes Insignificant words dissolve into a mist Vacuuming my feelings dust - nothing in heart is insignificant Without adding to the total of our owl conversation under four eyes /I will always love you more than life/ even in the night's zephyr and shining galaxies Your aura proclaims the dimension of the universe and the murmur of nature The virtuous circle, not a cancerous tumor My love philosophy: double our footprints where dreams prolong us until they are absorbed by floods /I will always love you more than life/ The paths are fair to those who love

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/3/2023 10:33:00 AM

Awww...Dear Anne-Lise, what a beautiful poem! Probably some topics bring the best in us. Silent One will have hard time placing so many exquisite poems. "I will always love you more than life You are the sun and the air I breathe In the night's zephyr and wonder galaxies" - OMG, this is my most favourite line here. Hugs ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2023 8:36:00 AM

What a lovely write/picture. Love It... "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a wonderful day..........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2023 9:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/2/2023 9:15:00 PM

What a wonderfully evocative, heartfelt and love-filled piece.. And your philosophy of love is truly heartwarming.. I love the descriptions here, woven with scintillating threads of emotions and feelings.. Just so mesmerizing! "You are the sun and the air I breathe" Wow.. There are so many deep and soulful lines in this piece.. A beautiful take for the contest! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2023 4:31:00 AM

- Love cannot be seen with the eyes - but with the soul, Hiya :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/2/2023 5:20:00 AM

This is excellent Anne-Lise. Beautifully written with brilliant lines! I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2023 4:27:00 AM

- Love is shown in actions, not words Heidi :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 9/2/2023 2:28:00 AM

lovely write just lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2023 4:19:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Yolanda :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/1/2023 8:10:00 PM

"double our footprints in the sand where dreams prolong us when they are absorbed by flood I will always love you more than life" -- breathtaking imagery and beautiful sense...Love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2023 4:22:00 AM

- Footprints in the sand ... through both sunny and difficult times in life, Joe :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/1/2023 11:30:00 AM

dear poet your poem expresses love as it was, as it is, as it will forever be...good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 11:59:00 AM

- Love is the root of life, my friend ... thank you so much for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/1/2023 10:20:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your powerful words of emotion are beautiful to read and clearly emanate from the heart!! Lovely xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 10:23:00 AM

- True love brings everything out through emotion, Mike :) Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 9/1/2023 9:36:00 AM

Beautiful poem with so many metaphors and passionate thoughts. "You are the sun and the air I breathe', a true lover's line.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 10:29:00 AM

- You don't love someone because they're perfect, Jay … you love them for who they are… woven into the air you breathe… the joy feels like warm sunshine :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 9/1/2023 9:10:00 AM

I love the quote, “Your heart is the most valuable investment”, “ The murmuring of nature”, “ The owls conversation” I love every bit of this pome. Such excellent writing. Good luck my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 9:23:00 AM

- When the flame is lit, the story continues ... :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2023 7:08:00 AM

I will always love you more than life You are the sun and the air I breathe--so sweet and so heartfelt. Endearing vibes throughout, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 9:18:00 AM

- A true love devoid of demands, Vijay :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/1/2023 6:59:00 AM

Your poetry is truly remarkable, my friend. I am captivated by the powerful tone in your poem and the exquisite language you use to express your philosophy on love. It beautifully depicts the idea of expanding our existence in the realm of dreams, leaving an indelible mark in the sands of time. BOL in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 9:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the detailed and lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 9/1/2023 3:42:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2023 9:11:00 AM

- Thanks, Jeanette :) - hugs