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Bratte bakka og grøne lier

When the temperature drops Cold fingers, feet and itchy scarves King winter scattered snow over the country Decorated, as the beauty it created Ice cold sea crashes against the coast See how the birds are struggling in the wind Birds die of lack of food every winter Blue Tit, Yellowhammer, House Sparrow, Robin and Brambling Cold, strong wind and snowy branches Each calorie counts, to survive is a matter of finding food No stockings or warm shoes Do not worry, my little friends On my birdboard there is food for everyone 13.12.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
oh Anne Lise what a wonderful poem , is the picture from your home? I can imagine how the little birds struggle when snow blankets the ground and they rely on human intervention:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2018 2:31:00 PM
- Funny you asked, Jan ... because it looks like my cherry tree :) - And bird feeds are the same as mine, I have coffee cups in my tree - but not apples :) - No, it's not my private photo :) - Thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2018 2:06:00 PM
A divine metaphor!
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Date: 1/28/2018 2:10:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2017 1:36:00 PM
How wonderful Anne-Lise! It makes winter a little less sad :)
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Date: 12/20/2017 1:52:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, S.O.T.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/20/2017 7:40:00 AM
A wonderfully sweet write Anne-Lise. Where I live the birds don't worry too much. I hope life is smiling with you. Have a beautiful Christmas.
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Date: 12/20/2017 11:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, James :) - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2017 5:05:00 AM
Lovely poem Anne-Lise and a message we should all heed, we can’t exist without birds, well written. :))
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Date: 12/19/2017 7:57:00 AM
- So true, Roy :) - Thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/18/2017 3:24:00 PM
The cold and I have never been friends, Ann-Lise! I know how these birds must feel. Luckily kindhearted people like you go to great lengths to help them out. Love your lovely poem and generosity:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/19/2017 7:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/16/2017 2:06:00 AM
You are a caring Godfather for those birds... Unfortunately I never paid attention to the surroundings...I better do it now...Nice write A_L
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Date: 12/16/2017 3:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Anand :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/15/2017 12:13:00 PM
I just sprinkled some sunflower seeds in my yard for the birds...lovely A-L
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:15:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/15/2017 1:08:00 AM
I will be right over! Such a lovely poem!
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:16:00 PM
- Happy to see you Arthur, thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/14/2017 9:37:00 PM
aww... the weather can get really rough, thankfully there are people like you who take care all year round, hugs x
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:14:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/14/2017 8:00:00 PM
Loved your write Anne-Lise. I always feel bad for these guys at this time of year. It is hard to be a bird in the winter :)
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:15:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Judith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 6:04:00 PM
no beauty is greater than to care for the lest of thee, a beautiful soul you have poet
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:12:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 5:00:00 PM
One only has to read your poetry, to know where your heart is,,this is a beautiful poem. Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:13:00 PM
- Happy to see you Harry, thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 2:02:00 PM
Feeding those beautiful winter birds..Lovely write Anne..
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Date: 12/13/2017 2:10:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 10:55:00 AM
Very nice! I am not sure why the winter birds aren't coming to my feeder, having tried 2 different kinds of seeds so far.
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Date: 12/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
- They eat the most .... I give them sunflower seeds, bread, fat without salt and fruit :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 9:22:00 AM
Great message Anne Lise.. How sad that climate change is really affecting wildlife and in particular the birds...
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Date: 12/13/2017 1:04:00 PM
- Not easy to be a bird today - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 8:39:00 AM
Winter is not very far away. Just reading this very descriptive work made me shiver. Very well written.
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Date: 12/13/2017 1:08:00 PM
- Nice to see you, Robert - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 7:42:00 AM
Love this :) xomo!
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Date: 12/13/2017 1:12:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 6:14:00 AM
You captured the essence of love and humanity in your last two lines--what a unique theme..caring words in a winter scene--well done, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 12/13/2017 9:01:00 AM
- Faithful reader Vijay, always a pleasure to see you :) - Thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/13/2017 5:57:00 AM
loved this sweet Sunshine...:) -luloo
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Date: 12/13/2017 8:59:00 AM
- Happy to see you on my poem, thanks for the lovely comment luloo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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