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asks the white daisy found the answer - and ate it - conquest or capture made no promises it flourished reckless and wild - the ones who have smelled 04.06.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved Contest, Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show sponsor, Dilly Dally 6th place in the contest

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/29/2023 8:12:00 AM

Grand tribute to daisies. I have them growing in large flower pots here at my home. I hope all is well with you. Cheers Brian

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/18/2023 8:22:00 AM

Reckless and wild daisies - love them. A great write Anne! :)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:25:00 AM

The the idea of flourishing reckless and wild -suits the contest down to the ground Anne-Lise :) Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2023 10:49:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, finally over the flu enough to comment on poetry of my friends. Hugs and congratulations on your Haiku. I thought they were awesome!

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/7/2023 12:16:00 PM

Stunning photo of this the love me-love-me-not flower. You've shown us, then told us, really love this one! b0l

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/12/2023 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! well done X

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:21:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Anaya :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2023 12:54:00 PM

VEry interesting how you did the two very differently, Anne-Lise. I think I like them both equally!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 8:40:00 AM

- Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:32:00 AM

you've done a great job here

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 7:03:00 AM

- Thanks for the comment, Jack :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/5/2023 5:29:00 AM

Beautiful flowers, Anne-Lise---beautiful poetry!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 7:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/5/2023 5:27:00 AM

I like yours a lot.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 7:02:00 AM

- Thank you, S.V. :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/5/2023 4:01:00 AM

Hi Anne I, too love daises and both haikus are Perfection. Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 7:04:00 AM

- Thanks -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2023 3:03:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I have always loved daisies but have not had any in my garden in a long time. I may try to find some so that I can enjoy their beauty once again. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 3:11:00 AM

- I have them in my garden, Sara ... it got really big last summer ... had to dig it up and divide it this year ... hope it will do well ... beautiful flowers :) - Thanks for the comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/4/2023 12:30:00 PM

Love the contrast between the two haiku, Perfect for the contest. Hope you've had a lovely day Anne Lise, Good luck in the contest. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 3:05:00 AM

- Thank you, Tom - We had a lovely weekend with a nice day at sea, although it was a bit cold - Hope you had a lovely weekend too...give my regards to Jane :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2023 11:59:00 AM

Anne-Lisse your haiku collection is a marvelous display of creativity. The quality of your imagery is exceptional, as evidenced by the poem about a white daisy pondering a question, discovering the answer, and consuming it without concern for conquest or possession. This flower thrives in its untamed state, attracting those who appreciate its fragrance.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2023 3:00:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las :) - hugs