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Silence no pain - Inside the eye of a tornado, my hallucinations Is this death? So bury me quickly free me from this nightmare Thoughts no one hears The voices in my head slowly creeps in A cheerful parade a choir of angels I guess And for a moment I believe this is the end I have to be strong and escape from this dream In the glow of a silver star The voice is still there ... and it's yours, my dear 02.12.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Voices .... Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 1st place in the contest

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/18/2018 10:45:00 AM

Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/18/2018 1:28:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/14/2018 10:34:00 PM

Truly beautiful... congratulations... Happy Holidays Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2018 12:39:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2018 7:13:00 AM

Back with congrats for the #1 spot on the winning chart..well done, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2018 1:44:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/9/2018 1:44:00 AM

Oooh, that last line packs a powerful punch, Sunshine. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read this -- I think it's one of your best and so deserving of its win. Congratulations, Hon! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2018 12:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2018 11:00:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2018 12:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2018 6:04:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2018 12:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2018 10:05:00 AM

We all need that reassuring voice during adversity.. Love how you did this poem Anne Lise... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2018 12:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for my 1st place in the contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/3/2018 8:36:00 PM

Love this, especially the way it ended.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2018 11:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/3/2018 11:52:00 AM

What a lovely thought from a thoughtfully lovely person...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 12:35:00 PM

- Charlie, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/3/2018 10:10:00 AM

A creative and lovely take on this contest theme, Anne-Lise. Regards & Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 12:34:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

Very nicely penned Anne..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 12:34:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/3/2018 5:58:00 AM

Wonderfully written and nice pic, sweet Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 6:29:00 AM

- Hi Kim, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/3/2018 5:35:00 AM

Phantasmagorical poem filled with profound rapturous ideas masterfully done dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck. Hugs xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/4/2018 6:00:00 AM

It is a Greek word which means extremely beautiful !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 5:49:00 AM

- "Phantasmagorical" sounds great ... but I do not know what that means :)) - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robertina B.

Date: 12/2/2018 10:12:00 PM

Really enjoyed your free verse, Sunshine.. Absolutely wonderful!! Photo is adorable.. Many blessings to you!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:42:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2018 8:30:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this well descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions because of its beauty. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:42:00 PM

- Eve, many thanks for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2018 2:57:00 PM

Glad to know the voices were friendly. Good theme for the contest, Anne-Lise. All the best..you have my vote for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/2/2018 2:09:00 PM

tugging at the heartstrings; so tenderly imparted, anne... happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 2:17:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/2/2018 1:57:00 PM

At sundown when shadows appear dreams escape pass pillars of night where real is imaginary and imaginary real and voices trigger our senses...interacting on different planes... Opps...what was I doing...I like the write...it made me think of possibilities...All the best Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 2:02:00 PM

- Shadows often appear in our dreams, Arturo :) - Many thanks for your visit and your thoughtful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/2/2018 1:25:00 PM

Great take on the theme Sunshine, good luck. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 1:56:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)