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11.08. 2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- U or V - Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Many golden suns have fallen looking back and my heart calling Petals pressed, moist dew falling at night Explore another path, mountain peaks snow white Autumn's symphony is already forgotten beauty's dazzling array wrapped in cotton The journey is difficult, snowstorm predicted threads of despair, the cold bites wicked Time hasty steps a frozen look in the eyes the grip crumbled as thin paper, everything has its price In this tranquil journey, perfectly for rest with bated breath, sleep at my breast Beneath the silver milky way - silent whisper; you are so inexorably far away

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I Am Anaya

Date: 8/16/2023 3:00:00 PM

Anne-Lise with pleasure I shall fav this journey of Autumn's transition into melancholic thoughts of days shortened and chilly nights, awaiting. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2023 12:15:00 PM

Back with hearty congrats on your well-deserved win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

Sheer beauty, Anne-Lise. I love the metaphor, the descriptions, the images and the intricate expression of the journey of a soul! Wonderfully crafted and written! Congratulations! Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2023 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write. I love your pretty picture. Have a great day with your win...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2023 2:02:00 PM

great storytelling with imagery, I bet you won. I ought to go see the winner list.

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/12/2023 4:50:00 PM

how stark life can be trapped in a cold lonely place when a wish far away holds your thoughts... good luck dear poet

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/12/2023 12:23:00 PM

"The journey is difficult, snowstorm predicted threads of despair, the cold bites wicked Time hasty steps a frozen look in the eyes" -- Wow! Enrapturing poetry.

Joseph May

Date: 8/12/2023 7:13:00 AM

The golden hues of autumn fade into snowy winters, Very nicely penned Anne... hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/11/2023 10:57:00 PM

This journey is fraught with a tinge of sorrow, but with beautiful expectancy ! Lovely poem Anne ! All the best ! Hugs dear friend...

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/11/2023 7:08:00 PM

Magnificent poem, Anne-Lise. Just love it!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/11/2023 11:20:00 AM

Truly, exquisitely crafted. Its beauty is tinged with a hint of sorrow! Splendid composition, Anne-Lise!

Jay Narain

Date: 8/11/2023 10:04:00 AM

Nice poem. Love the last few lines, "Beneath the silver milky way - silent whisper; you are so inexorably far away"

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/11/2023 7:53:00 AM

Excellent. Well written poem Anne-Lise! I love it :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2023 7:48:00 AM

Beautiful with a touch of melancholy! Fantastic write, Anne-Lise! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane

Date: 8/11/2023 5:47:00 AM

My goodness, Anne-Lise! That photograph is as vibrant and lovely as your lines. LOVE the silent whisper.