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11.08. 2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- U or V - Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

 Many golden suns have fallen
 looking back and my heart calling
 Petals pressed, moist dew falling at night
 Explore another path, mountain peaks snow white
 Autumn's symphony is already forgotten
 beauty's dazzling array wrapped in cotton

 The journey is difficult, snowstorm predicted
 threads of despair, the cold bites wicked
 Time hasty steps a frozen look in the eyes
 the grip crumbled as thin paper, everything has its price
 In this tranquil journey, perfectly for rest
 with bated breath, sleep at my breast
 Beneath the silver milky way
 - silent whisper; you are so inexorably far away

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I Am Anaya

Date: 8/16/2023 3:00:00 PM

Anne-Lise with pleasure I shall fav this journey of Autumn's transition into melancholic thoughts of days shortened and chilly nights, awaiting. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2023 12:15:00 PM

Back with hearty congrats on your well-deserved win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

Sheer beauty, Anne-Lise. I love the metaphor, the descriptions, the images and the intricate expression of the journey of a soul! Wonderfully crafted and written! Congratulations! Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2023 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write. I love your pretty picture. Have a great day with your win...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2023 2:02:00 PM

great storytelling with imagery, I bet you won. I ought to go see the winner list.

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/12/2023 4:50:00 PM

how stark life can be trapped in a cold lonely place when a wish far away holds your thoughts... good luck dear poet

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/12/2023 12:23:00 PM

"The journey is difficult, snowstorm predicted threads of despair, the cold bites wicked Time hasty steps a frozen look in the eyes" -- Wow! Enrapturing poetry.