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An alpha with great confidence he exploits all the women he comes across The goal is money, glitter and glamor Even Snow White fell for his charm His ego, takes the place of the spirit He is currently in prison in "Hacamonduo" with serious charges 03/01/2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/8/2022 4:55:00 PM
A dress can't change nature, the culprit should be punished. Lovely and daring. I think few writers have courage to say it. Happy New Year
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Date: 1/7/2022 4:30:00 AM
I am scared of snakes the most, especially if it is a cobra or King cobra. Anne, you have invested it with serpentine charms. An interesting read ! Best of Luck in the contest, friend!
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Date: 1/4/2022 3:34:00 PM
Charmed by our words if not by the snake lol, nice one Sunshine xo
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Date: 1/6/2022 11:43:00 AM
- Thank you very much. Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2022 2:21:00 PM
A creative/fun write. A snake is a snake no matter how he is dressed. Eve in the bible learned that one. Have a great and blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 1/6/2022 11:44:00 AM
- You're right about that, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2022 11:31:00 AM
Yet women continue to adore him! That is particularly disgusting to other men! Aloha!
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:16:00 PM
- Yes, many allow themselves to be charmed ... but, with time they will regret - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2022 9:37:00 AM
Oh boy, I sure hope he learns something while he's in there. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:24:00 PM
- I hope so too, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2022 4:11:00 AM
He'll have plenty of time to reflect then Anne-Lise! What an interesting take on the contest, Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:23:00 PM
- Hope he thinks deep and long, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/4/2022 1:38:00 AM
Several of them around. An enjoyable read with the charmer getting his just desserts.
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:22:00 PM
- He gets what he deserves, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/3/2022 6:29:00 PM
The snake charmer with serious charges, yes! Good one!
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:21:00 PM
- Don't be fooled ... he has charm, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/3/2022 2:36:00 PM
They are out there. He finally paid the price.
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:19:00 PM
- unfortunately they exist ... many get away with it, Vijay - Ruins the lives of others - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/3/2022 1:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this fiction story Anne-Lise. My very best hopes for a win, and congratulations on having your poems selected in the anthology.
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Date: 1/3/2022 1:44:00 PM
- Do I have poems in the anthology, Las ? ... I have not posted any - Thanks for reading this poem ... written for fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/3/2022 12:41:00 PM
so a bit of a charming snake, then! :) ~ps
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Date: 1/3/2022 12:46:00 PM
- ... they exist, P.S. ... but, are really a loser ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/3/2022 12:11:00 PM
A lot of them about Anne, usually wearing sheep's clothing. Tom
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Date: 1/3/2022 12:18:00 PM
- Anne ... has been quiet for a long time ... - Yes, and they are often "slippery as an eel", Tom :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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