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10.12.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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The clouds are breaking a prospect from the hilltop Visions have been starved Magnificent and awful Mother earth canceled the deal

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/17/2024 7:43:00 AM

Anne-Lise, you did really well with this. You have made this abstract enough so that I as a reader can ponder all kinds of scenarios. We do need to be very careful if we want to protect our existence overall. Who presumes to see the big picture or even knows what that is? You did something special here!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/14/2024 11:53:00 PM

Great imagery here Anne-Lise..I'm not a mother Nature believer as such.?? yet a strong poem to View and read.'

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/11/2024 10:34:00 PM

Impressive if enigmatic Tanka. It is incredibly fascinating, with great imagery. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2024 7:25:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 12/11/2024 9:10:00 PM

I wonder from where you pick up such telling images! Great Tanka. These days nature takes an aggressive turn. When it rains, it rains in torrents. Great Tanka dear Anne. Love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2024 7:24:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2024 7:28:00 AM

This is such an inspiring artwork and also how youv written for the picture is so fitting! Especially “ the clouds are breaking “ and how the rest flows in such a powerful manner! Impressive tanka. So well written on what we witness today when it comes to Mother earth. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2024 11:04:00 AM

- Thank you, Ink :) - hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 12/10/2024 9:57:00 PM

She will get back at us for not taking care of her...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2024 11:04:00 AM

- you never know... we have to take care of our earth... thanks for your comment, Michael :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/10/2024 2:43:00 PM

She closes her eyes to much...like I do with my children, recalling what it is to be young. Love transcends all. She is ultimately in rocking-control -- and creation is her cradle of divine mystery. I have viewed most things from valleys -- my head out of the clouds. Somehow it will all work out for the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2024 11:01:00 AM

- Let's hope so, Joe :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/10/2024 10:31:00 AM

Mankind will face severe punishment for the devastation he's causing to beautiful mother earth. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2024 10:34:00 AM

- Yes, that's true Tom :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 12/10/2024 10:25:00 AM

Nice Tanka. Picture great too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2024 10:33:00 AM

- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs