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The words I believed in the thoughts that became lines the poem's building blocks refused nothing but, never got through the eye of the needle 05.10.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 11/20/2022 6:52:00 AM
Now they have. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/11/2022 3:58:00 PM
Very nicely penned Anne, best wishes
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:28:00 PM
Very profound and crisp. You have hit the nail on the head without being loquacious! Smile, all the best in the contest! Love and hugs !
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:37:00 AM
Quite deep, Anne-Lise and well written, Pangie xx
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:19:00 AM
Majestic writing that Passes easily through the eye of the needle, my beloved friend, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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Date: 10/6/2022 12:13:00 AM
Indeed, the poet’s dilemma ~ beautifully expressed, Sunshine
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2022 3:09:00 AM
- Thanks, U.S. :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 1:51:00 PM
A real interesting thought. Love the pic too…yarn that looks like colorful lines. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:08:00 AM
- ... like colorful lines … that was my thought too… many thanks, Kim :)
Date: 10/5/2022 1:04:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your insight is amazing. Each of us has thought of beautiful poems that were never written by taking specific words and putting them into lines. I wish you luck in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2022 3:09:00 AM
- Las, many thanks for your words and wishes :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 9:53:00 AM
Your ending describes elegantly the essence of your theme. Aptly done, Anne-Lise, in just a few words.
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:47:00 AM
- Few words can say a lot, Vijay :))) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 9:40:00 AM
Crumpled up or deleted, but yes probably deserved to be threaded through the needle, succinct meaningful lines Anne-Lise, cheers David
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:46:00 AM
- Thrown, crumpled or forgotten ... they did not reach the target ... thanks for your comment, David :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 9:32:00 AM
ha! i think we can all relate to this, anne-lise! well done!
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:43:00 AM
- Thanks, Ilene :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 7:58:00 AM
Uniquue way of putting it , Sunshine. I like it! Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/5/2022 10:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment and wishes, Bill :) - hugs
Date: 10/5/2022 7:53:00 AM
Very profound~we all have words that we have formed into lines, imagining grand verses that never came to fruition. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 10/5/2022 8:00:00 AM
... yes, many "poems" have been thrown away before they got on paper, Paulette :) - Many thanks for your words and wishes :) - hugs

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