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- the King and the Queen -

He King of Hearts He was deeply in Love I will fill Your body with Love My life can be lived in A new Dimension I will give You a Diamond ring My Queen and Goddess Queen of Hearts : I do 17.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thanks for my 3rd place in the contest -

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 10/19/2014 2:59:00 PM

Bah..Nice structure...Innocent love...I enjoyed "The King and The Queen "...Best wishes to you with love and respect...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2014 3:03:00 PM

- A poem written for fun ..... My first Rictameter and a 3rd place in the contest :) - Sandip, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/3/2014 9:04:00 PM

A diamond ring, reflecting a pair of priceless hearts, countless karats in dauntless dimensions of red delight. A gorgeous union of love with symbol of gleaming indestructibility Anne...J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/4/2014 5:36:00 AM

- Justin, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/28/2014 2:32:00 PM

This must be fairytale love....saying I do between a king and queen! Well done Anne Lise...and congrats on your win. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 2:41:00 PM

- Yes, a fairytale love :) - Paul, thanks for visiting and congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2014 5:59:00 AM

Nicely penned poem, congrats on the win, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 6:00:00 AM

- Dr. Ram, thanks for visiting and congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/27/2014 11:54:00 AM

Love the way you did this in the shape of a diamond. Awesome Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:49:00 AM

- Phyllis, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos

Date: 9/27/2014 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2014 5:28:00 PM

- Thanks for my 3rd place in the contest,Judy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 10:58:00 AM

Wow Anne Lise this is unique n brilliant! Congrats on big win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:50:00 AM

- Dr. Upma, thanks for visiting and congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 9/27/2014 10:11:00 AM

Loved this write Anne, thanks for sharing! Always, Keith

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:48:00 AM

- Keith, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win on this complex, rich wonderful write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:48:00 AM

- Maurice, thanks for visiting and congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 8:35:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats - i do love the form you used in this poem:-) hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2014 5:47:00 AM

- Jan, thanks for visiting and congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 9/25/2014 5:21:00 AM

that is so nice such an interesting style, a special talent to write like that

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2014 12:07:00 PM

- Cynthia, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/21/2014 10:43:00 PM

You did an excellent job with a form I was not familiar with! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2014 2:51:00 AM

- Matthew, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 7:44:00 PM

I love this Anne-Lise. It is for the marriage contest?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2014 1:32:00 AM

- Maybe it fits the contest, thanks for the idea Maurice :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/18/2014 1:25:00 PM

A diamond thrust of diamond heart. Beautifully worded. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 1:28:00 PM

- Bl, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2014 12:29:00 PM

got moonstruck again, anne.. hugggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 12:45:00 PM

- Nette, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2014 11:29:00 AM

this is lovely Anne Lise,,,,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 11:32:00 AM

- Harry, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/18/2014 10:01:00 AM

A very nice write Anne...best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 11:13:00 AM

- Joseph, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/18/2014 9:49:00 AM

Good morning Anne Lise, I love what you did with segmenting the 1st. part of the image with King and the 2nd. part with the Queen. The line; "My life can be lived in A new Dimension" gives great balance and cohesion to the piece. Great job. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 11:13:00 AM

- My first: Rictameter - Earl, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2014 5:42:00 AM

Ahh!! Creative work..The shape sets it off..Thanks for all the visits, prayers, and kindness..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 6:35:00 AM

- Sara, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/18/2014 3:55:00 AM

How could she refuse such a proposal expressed in this marvelously crafted way? Impressive dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 4:26:00 AM

- Demetrios, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/17/2014 8:34:00 PM

Sparkling with love A-L....hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 2:49:00 AM

- Tim, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/17/2014 6:13:00 PM

really very beautifully penned piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 2:49:00 AM

- Liam, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2014 5:30:00 PM

love the structure of the poem Anne Line it is very beautifully written:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 2:48:00 AM

- Jan, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2014 4:02:00 PM

For the proposal contest? Cute one!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2014 4:27:00 PM

- Soup mail - Andrea, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Banjo Casto

Date: 9/17/2014 1:40:00 PM

Affectionately written! I see a true love here in your poem,Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2014 1:49:00 PM

- Banjo, thank you for visiting and comments my poem: - The King and The Queen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)