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You found my words - and you devoured them The jungle is thirsty and you must satisfy it The infinity of love, a strong and deep feeling I'm numb Within short minutes you change personality - created by the monster A black raven ... steals in vain Kissed by the lips of contempt Crimes and shame, burning in your veins - facing the wall - emptiness 'No pain, no gain' 28/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/26/2019 10:21:00 AM

I am shivering! A chilling poem for the day after Christmas!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/29/2019 8:06:00 AM

- Many thanks Sunlite, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/9/2019 9:01:00 AM

Your pen is spilling dark thoughts onto the white fabric of my soul. Good write. Your avatar/photo made me smile, he's a dead-ringer for my own grandson. :) Have a happy holidays.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2019 12:25:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Phil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:16:00 AM

Your imagery is wonderfully dark.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2019 1:57:00 PM

- Caren, thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Ann Foster

Date: 12/1/2019 1:19:00 PM

Wow... very powerful write. I love it... Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2019 1:40:00 PM

- Glad you liked it Ann, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/30/2019 8:08:00 PM

A powerful and deep write Anne-Lise. Great write...Thanks also for stopping by. Have a great night! Hugs // Charlie :)))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2019 8:36:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/29/2019 7:13:00 PM

dark powerful write falls from your pen, this is well crafted and leaves an impact, well done my friend... hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:55:00 PM

- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/29/2019 7:06:00 PM

Mysterious verse here. My nephews set a poem of mine to music called "Demon Demon" by Ghost Funk Orchestra. Google it in! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:57:00 PM

- I want to check it, Matthew :) - Thank you very much for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2019 10:17:00 AM

Quite a dark verse Anne, well composed. Hope you have a great weekend. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:55:00 PM

- Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 11/29/2019 7:34:00 AM

Poe warned of the dangers of quoting the raven.....a cold dark corner painted here Anna Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:56:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2019 7:21:00 AM

A dark one well expressed. Hugs Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:54:00 PM

- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2019 12:37:00 AM

Strong emotions felt, good write.. hugs eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:54:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2019 6:34:00 PM

the darkness always comes when the demon speaks excellent pen dear anne lise i pray your weekend is blessed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Thank you very much Liam, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2019 1:02:00 PM

I really enjoyed this write - a deep poem filled with raven warning - the demon works in so many curious dangerous ways. A truly talented poem. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/28/2019 12:37:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I love this for the Raven's contempt and the bi-polar warning. Hope your Thanksgiving features a lighter bird. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Thank you very much Richard, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2019 10:28:00 AM

I felt the intensity of your poem, Anne-Lise--the demon is dark.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2019 11:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much Vijay, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/28/2019 9:25:00 AM

This is dark! Tingles in the veins. Well done! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2019 11:55:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, thank you very much Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)