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Anne-Lise Andresen
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10.11.2024
 
- To reach for the stars - even though it's complicated - a Cinderella dream - ~ quote by poet Filter through leafless trees A metal rust path changes often require sacrifice The branches creak on the hinges Catching a glimpse of the hungry moon colored in cold marble Beethoven's "Ode to Joy" in modern electric chords startling effect The purr of contentment through lost senses Stardust glitters on dead leaves

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Date: 11/25/2024 10:33:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I can hear the sounds and imagine seeing what you describe. Your poems have the ability to carry me to these special places! Smiles!
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Date: 11/11/2024 11:07:00 AM
Nice poem with imagery and a great picture.
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Date: 11/11/2024 10:30:00 AM
You set the mood perfectly in this theme of nature Anne-Lise your words reflect on leafless trees and changes of nature well, with it's surrounding imagery. Enjoyed reading Dear Lady...Thank you for posting...
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Date: 11/11/2024 8:31:00 AM
So incredibly lovely Sunshine....a peaceful poem! Debx
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Date: 11/11/2024 1:06:00 AM
The purr of contentment describes this poem perfectly. I'm glad to see you back on the soup. Must be careful not to miss your poems. Hugs.
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Date: 11/10/2024 7:18:00 PM
Cool imagery and thoughts! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 11/10/2024 4:21:00 PM
Great poem explores change, loss, and the bittersweet beauty of nature and music. The imagery of “leafless trees” and “dead leaves” suggests a sense of desolation. I was away from soup for a long time as well. Nice meeting you back
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Date: 11/10/2024 4:17:00 PM
Love the imagery and the calm quiet mood your word choices inspire. Good luck in the contest.
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