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- Sparkling Oceans Apart -

You're a maiden so hot burning thoughts whom melts ice inside deep waves salted unfolding ocean swells kissing your feet For once spoke those hot lips the truth shining Sunshine pleasing warm beholding to one's eye golden crowned jewel beauty rainbow luster coloring pearl treasure It's giving off their beauty pure free that does not require something in return A lady who pleases the heart warm Princess cut with deep class sparkling pure utopia's adorable sun rise How the body is heated and hear her echoing heart beat in the chambers Shining a future path dreaming ore every single moment precious links each one spent with you falling under spell Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous Magic silk covers batting eyelids enchanting soft lovingly flowers beautiful petals held within the shell Let the rose live forever and the sun shines always endless times glistening gold Written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne- Lise Andresen a co write in a 9/10 syllable count a warm thank you anne lise

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Date: 11/22/2014 2:26:00 PM
I read the poem on Anne's wall...Same comment for you...The poem is a joint creation, but I love the lines so much"Love is like pure sparkling magic gem unpredictable true and marvelous "...Best to you...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 9:43:00 AM
thank you sandip dear friend love sure is pure wonderful comment heartfelt bless you pal
Date: 11/21/2014 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful poem from our sweet annlise and yourself liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/21/2014 9:01:00 AM
thank you charmaine wonderful comment smiling bless you dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 11/20/2014 8:37:00 PM
Good collaboration between you and Anne Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/20/2014 8:49:00 PM
thank you kindly ken dear friend was fun to do have a blessed day pal
Date: 11/20/2014 7:49:00 AM
I recall commenting on this magnificent poem created by two lovely people and poets : Anne-Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise and giving them a seven to each. Why my comment is not here to be seen is a mystery! Anyway, I repeat myself and my assessment: Great poem and a seven to each!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/20/2014 4:38:00 PM
your so very sweet demetrios truly heartfelt wonderful comment thank you deeply bless you dear friend
Date: 11/20/2014 7:25:00 AM
Wow! You've penned here such a beautiful and very romantic love poem my dear friend, Liam with Anne Lise! Great writing team you make! Very dazzling write indeed!A 7 for me! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/20/2014 4:53:00 PM
thank you ever so kindly dorian for the dazzling very beautiful comment smiling dear friend bless you this came together a treat for the two of us
Date: 11/19/2014 4:07:00 PM
- You did the greatest job Liam ..... and I get the "fav." ...... - And yes, many lovely visits and comments! - I love the poem - thanks again my friend :) - I give you 7 ++++ and a fav. !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 4:44:00 PM
together this is truly powerful anne lise your words sang this piece into a higher tune thank you dear friend have a blessed beautiful evening
Date: 11/19/2014 2:34:00 PM
You and Anne Lise created a magical and very beautiful poem together, Liam! A wonderful collaboration...hugs, Rhonda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 2:48:00 PM
ah your so sweet rhonda thank you very kindly wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 11/19/2014 1:08:00 PM
Liam, A most wonderful and excellent collaborated write here with Anne-Lise!! I already commented on her posting of the poem. A definite 7+++ from me Mate!! Good on both of you here with this enchanting poem. (I already Fav'd it with Anne-Lise!!) Again, congratulations to the both of you on this write!! Best Always and Spill Ink!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 2:05:00 PM
thank you gary this was fun colab dazzling beautiful comment pal got the leprechaun dancing in a field of buttercups bless you heartfelt beautiful comment
Date: 11/19/2014 8:38:00 AM
Liam....I love Anne Lise! I call her Sunshine! You both worked well together on this romantic and dreamy piece. Beautiful! :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 10:47:00 AM
smiling eilleen thank you dear pal truly wonderful comment yeah anne lise sure brings the sunshine bless you
Date: 11/19/2014 8:07:00 AM
A beautiful dance created liam ....fabulous
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 10:41:00 AM
thank you kindly our words danced together just beautiful thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/19/2014 4:21:00 AM
- After the internet ..... world became smaller ..... even if the distance is great - Thank you my dear friend Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/19/2014 4:36:00 AM
smiling just at your finger tips or pen in our case wonderful comment anne lise thank you for your wonderful pen heartfelt appreciated enjoyed writing this with you bless dear frfiend

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