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Conflict free diamonds, does not exist The pulse knocks, longing is aroused A train of thoughts with famished wagons Devastated is the soul, devoured by a shark We had nothing to share Without progress The storm has subsided From cliché to reality, and a discouraged circle Don't hunt blindly on the storming crush Sometimes love is not enough Every experience and every interaction are our conscious and unconscious feelings Gravity keeps me steady Everything will remain miserable Nothing was true 09/09/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Sometimes love is not enough Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 1st place in the contest

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/19/2019 7:52:00 AM

Wonderful piece,beautiful write...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest. Bravo!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Olusegun, thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 2:58:00 PM

Sunshine congratulations on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2019 3:45:00 AM

- Thanks D.H., for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/14/2019 11:14:00 PM

Congratulations and blessings. Beautifully written words :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2019 6:10:00 AM

- Regina, thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/14/2019 4:26:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2019 6:10:00 AM

- Thanks Alexis, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2019 3:12:00 PM

Back with congrats on your first place win Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2019 6:09:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There

Date: 9/14/2019 1:29:00 PM

This is wonderfully written ~ congratulations on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2019 6:09:00 AM

- H.T., thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/14/2019 11:37:00 AM

This is deep and hidden behind heartache... i get the feeling, i should say the grass is not greener on the other side and i hope he realised that... great poem.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2019 11:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for my 1st place on your winning list, S.O. - Grass tastes like grass no matter which side you choose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phatt Matt

Date: 9/11/2019 9:23:00 PM

Bravo! I genuinely felt this one thanks for sharing ~ Matt

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:15:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Phatt :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/10/2019 3:00:00 PM

Wow! Anne-Lise, You did a great job with the contest theme. When I finished reading this " Everything is not what it seems" popped in my head. I think you penned yourself a winner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a fantastic day;-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for the encouraging comment and visit, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/10/2019 10:45:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, the emotions in this piece touch the heart and soul as one reads your wonderful piece. Deep power, emotion and creativity flow through this excellent piece Anne-Lise. Reads like a winner. Have a wonderful Tuesday.Hugs...Mike. XX A definite, powerful fav.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:13:00 AM

- Many thanks, my friend Mike - your comment and visit means a lot to me ... very grateful for your "fave" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/10/2019 2:58:00 AM

It was just an illusion.from the start. Well written Anne. Good luck. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 2:51:00 AM

" Devastated is the soul, devoured by a shark" beautifully penned. The underlying tone is everything! Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:51:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Caren :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyric Man

Date: 9/9/2019 8:27:00 PM

I know what it’s like to walk hand in hand with a lover in the cold.. when harsh Winter comes and I never thought to bring my coat. SS.. Your write transported me to that moment when I left her hand to survive (and when I was warmed she was gone... forever!) You are brilliant and passionate. You have magic to take me back in time. Such a gift!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:51:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, L.M. :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 5:04:00 PM

wow, one can feel the power of that storm in this piece...i think we have a winner here...great penning my friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:50:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/9/2019 2:05:00 PM

" Don't hunt blindly on the storming crush Sometimes love is not enough"...and most times not...I like the message

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:50:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Arturo:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/9/2019 2:02:00 PM

Anne_lise this is a great free verse, best of luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:49:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, D.H. :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/9/2019 12:35:00 PM

Really nicely crafted my friend. A wonderful entry for the contest. Best of luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2019 4:48:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Chris :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 9/9/2019 9:00:00 AM

Perfect my friend!! A winner for sure!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 2:07:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2019 8:55:00 AM

Nicely done Anne-Lise...ready for a win...Poetry Hugs...^WW^ :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 2:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2019 8:32:00 AM

So well said: Don't hunt blindly on the storming crush..conflict free diamond does not exist..so many lovely lines, Anne-Lise..a winning poem you wrote.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 1:15:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2019 7:16:00 AM

Well done Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 12:03:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/9/2019 3:16:00 AM

Beautifully done. I enjoyed reading this and wish you all the best in the contest. Thanks for always being so sweet and kind. Prayers.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 12:02:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)