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04.08.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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ROLLING WITH THE Rs

Poetry Contest

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Christine Watts

Date: 8/6/2025 4:12:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise a nice reflective piece Congratulations on your placing as we share together Cheers Christine

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/6/2025 11:02:00 AM

Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your selection in this contest. Well done. Thanks for your notification regarding my work Best wishes Howard

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 8/6/2025 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 12:07:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Maclawrence :) - hugs

Connie Pachecho

Date: 8/6/2025 6:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise-Congratulation on your win. Our journey, looking at each other's poems, was a win, fun.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 8:00:00 AM

- A moving winner list... maybe I'll slip off the list... exciting ... you never know :))) - Thanks :) - hugs

David Crandall

Date: 8/5/2025 12:51:00 PM

Interesting poem, it feels like an internal emotional struggle.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for your nice comment - a pleasure to see you, Daniel :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2025 11:39:00 AM

This is a very good one and if for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. A nice still life to go alongside. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:56:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/5/2025 10:54:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! What a wonderful entry for the contest! This form is a perfect visual match for roller coaster of emotions when forming an apology like " a fist in the face!" So visual and visceral. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings and hugs! Hope your summer has been warmer that ours here in CA!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:56:00 AM

- We had an incredibly beautiful July ... August started with rain and storms ... wet, cold and gray - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 8/5/2025 10:51:00 AM

Nice poem. Win or lose, you contributed something.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:54:00 AM

- I like writing for contests, Jay ... fun to win... but I don't expect anything... take it as it comes :) - hugs

Connie Pachecho

Date: 8/5/2025 4:51:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I could be wrong, but the r's pertain to the three subjects, and when I read Nette's example, I didn't see any alliteration. So, replying to your comment to another poet, I think that your poem passes. Your poem is really good.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/5/2025 10:40:00 AM

- Don't think about it, Connie ... it's "just" a contest... I'll leave mine as it is... "lose and win" with a smile :)

Connie Pachecho
Date: 8/5/2025 8:22:00 AM

After reading Andrea's poem, I'm lost. Hers has a lot of r's and alliteration. I might not know the rules here. I might even get more confused than you do.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/5/2025 5:10:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Connie ... I often get confused about the rules of the contest ... thank you for your friendly response, much appreciated :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 8/5/2025 4:16:00 AM

Memories produce mixed emotions in us. Powerful penning ! You are so good at writing short poems like haiku and similar type. All the Best dear Anne. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:52:00 AM

- My teacher always said: "Write short and simple" ... and I love it :) - Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/5/2025 2:22:00 AM

Anne-Lise, Another magnum opus from your brilliant pen. A work of great artistry, imagery and sincerity. Best of luck with this Thanks for praising my work in such generous terms Hugs Howard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:50:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Howard... a pleasure to see you :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 8/4/2025 6:24:00 PM

WOW! I've seen two of these (Rictameter poem) today. I might add my first two I've ever read. Probably for a contest, so good luck, my friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:49:00 AM

- This is the second time I write in this form ... "new" for me too :) - Many thanks, Bill :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/4/2025 4:32:00 PM

I liked your Rictameter...well penned & great contest contender. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:47:00 AM

- Thanks for the comment and good wishes, Sara :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

Well done, my friend! Emotive!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 7:46:00 AM

- Thank you for your kindness, Kim :) - hugs