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The musical of the rain sounds as tinkling music not a specific beat or rhythm Who has punctured Our Lord's clouds? Cracks opened on the sky The asphalt, wet and dark the passengers are silent breath mists the route hides the beak under the wing as wet crows could almost grasp the fear This narrow, dark and desolate country road Heavy rain major consequences feared landslides and floods A feeling of numbness the mood of melancholy or pathos everyone has paid their ticket drive carefully - hope to arrive home safely 07.11.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Rainy Days Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 12/3/2022 10:21:00 AM
Nice to see this one on the winner's list... Congratulations on your placement with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 11/18/2022 8:09:00 AM
Anne-Lise, CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive piece. Janice
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Date: 11/12/2022 11:23:00 PM
Congratulation my friend with this wining verse with this great imagery and feelings. Many blessing my friend
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:58:00 PM
Great narration of the rainy seasonal trip. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2022 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
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Date: 11/11/2022 8:12:00 AM
This poem perfectly captures that melancholy feeling of a cold, rainy day... Beautifully written and expressed... Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 11/11/2022 4:12:00 AM
On a rainy day, especially when it is a cloud burst, travel through winding lanes is equally dangerous and frightful. You have described the scene in all its horror. All the Best Smile! Love and hugs !
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Date: 11/8/2022 11:46:00 AM
You set the scene so well with your creative descriptions of the wet, rainy night, Anne Lise! Such a good poem! Love it! :)
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Date: 11/8/2022 4:50:00 AM
Lovely write, Anne-Lise. Great entry for the contest. Best wishes :) Hugs//Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2022 4:25:00 AM
What a glorious walk in the rain, dearest, Anne-Lise. It is pure magic listening to God's heavenly music with the sound of the raindrops! Hugs xxx and Blessings.
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Date: 11/8/2022 1:16:00 AM
Rain is necessary but not in excess. Lovely poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:40:00 PM
Don't worry, home is what you take with you, not what you leave behind... very beautiful
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Date: 11/7/2022 3:58:00 PM
Its so hard to see when the rain hits the asphalt, You have captured the scene well Anne, hugs
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Date: 11/7/2022 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful description Sunshine for when mother nature decides the earth needs drenching the consequences can be dire. Your poem is stunningly forceful, and quite alarming. You did very well to bring this threatening episode to the reader from a gentle beginning to a powerful summit.
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Date: 11/7/2022 2:11:00 PM
Not a good day when it rains on the way home. You invoked well gloominess felt on a rainy day. Home awaits!
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Date: 11/7/2022 1:46:00 PM
Who has punched the Lord's clouds? Great line and poem. I hope everyone gets home safely :)
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