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20.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Powder snow splendour the carousel in motion with expectations While the stars twinkling above - childhood memories return

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/25/2024 11:00:00 AM

Anne-Lise, nice how you can celebrate a simple pleasure! Also wonderful to let this play bring back fond memories. That speaks of a good upbringing (with narcissists far away)! Smiles!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2024 11:55:00 AM

Such a nostalgic and pretty poem

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/21/2024 2:06:00 PM

Powder snow is such a different snow. I don’t remember it from my childhood. I visited my grandson, went to make a snowball and the powder fell through my gloved fingers. I was amazed. They also had a sheet of ice over the snow and he made ninja stars. Great memory!

Jay Narain

Date: 11/21/2024 11:19:00 AM

Nice poem and a lovely picture.

Joseph May

Date: 11/21/2024 11:16:00 AM

"Carousel memories in motion," Lovely write Anne

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/21/2024 9:44:00 AM

Do we ever grow up, Christmas, Santa, Powder snow splendour, colourfully wrapped presents under a breathtaking lit Christmas tree. Wow! WHAT AN AMAZING TANKA. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/21/2024 5:44:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, I am so looking forward to the snow with so many memories in tow. I loved read your Tanka this morning filling me with hope of the first snow. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/20/2024 10:48:00 PM

Snow certainly brings our the kid in us Anne-Lise, it's even nicer now because I don't have to go out in it. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2024 2:01:00 AM

... beautiful to look at through the window, Tom :)))

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/20/2024 9:45:00 PM

Very lovely Tanka! Thanks for sharing your so enjoyed poem! Best wishes ~ AA

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/20/2024 6:32:00 PM

It's absolute bliss to read this, Anne-Lise. It's a fave for me. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2024 2:02:00 AM

- really appreciate your fave, Evelyn :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/20/2024 5:25:00 PM

so delicious poem, snow came back, childhood is back, enjoyed yann

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/20/2024 2:29:00 PM

This is lovely, Anne-Lise!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/20/2024 2:10:00 PM

Hey Anne-Lise, What a beautiful image of a starry, frosty night you capture in your Tanka! Think of whirling snow as a "carousal in action.

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/20/2024 12:59:00 PM

Ahm, I can live vicariously through your wintery words, Anne-Lise! I've skied the man-made snow grounds and tobogganed down by the cabin! :):)

John Read

Date: 11/20/2024 12:51:00 PM

Hi Anne, I remember as a kid, waking up to see my street covered in snow, couldn't wait to get out there and play, now days I can't wait to get inside. xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2024 1:59:00 AM

... agree ... can't wait to get inside ... way too cold :)))

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/20/2024 11:14:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, what a pretty picture of a starlit, snowy night you paint in your Tanka! Love the image of swirling snow like a "carousal in motion." Enjoyed this invitation to winter! Hugs and blessings!