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16.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Precipice, Portal, Perpetual Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

2nd place in the contest

I walk my last steps on the earthly plains, when the sun sets Through another dimension with breathtaking surreal landscape The mystical journey, back to the roots of creation

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Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2024 8:58:00 AM

Anne-Lise, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image too, hugs, Constance

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/25/2024 10:05:00 AM

This should take out top prize in both contests! Entering a portal back to the roots of creation, what a heavenly way to say it. I truly think this so original and meaningful, I hope it gains the praise it deserves Anne -Lise. A fave for me.

Valsa George

Date: 1/23/2024 4:09:00 AM

Such a meaningful and lovely Sijo ! In the final hours of life, we retrace our steps back to the roots if creation through a surreal landscape. This entry through the great portal assures a life of bliss ! All the Best dear Anne... love and hugs!~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/18/2024 3:42:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I felt like I was in an other time. Hugs. /Darlene/

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2024 3:06:00 PM

That's a wonderful picture to go with your words. We definitely don't know what the universe has in store in the future. Our lives are just tiny sparks. It's all rather remarkable. You're making me think!

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/17/2024 2:43:00 PM

Definitely captivating and pulls the reader to the depths of this journey in life , love it, hugs

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2024 12:10:00 PM

Is this killing two birds with one stone? Lol.. Great idea for the contest.. Best of luck..

Jay Narain

Date: 1/17/2024 11:10:00 AM

Nicely crafted poem. GL in contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2024 10:50:00 AM

Truly we shall each take that walk. God bless!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/16/2024 7:24:00 PM

A great story in a poem. I think going back 100 years is my limit. It gave me much to think about.

Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2024 5:37:00 PM

I love the last line of this well crafted write Anne, best wishes

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/16/2024 4:36:00 PM

Really nice poem, dear poet, a sense of ending and a new journey begun

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2024 3:59:00 PM

the title is perfect for the poem theme and the image and imagery are fabulous Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2024 1:16:00 PM

Creative lines penned in this one and some forward thinking. Thanks for sharing it with us and if it is for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara K