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Mice arrived in my house Maybe you are afraid My aunty eat grilled mice Must say that sounds nasty Mickey Mouse dinner ... no Mild hands will protect you More courageous than most 20.04.2017 Sun : - A-L Andresen :) ( Pleiades form : M ) www.howmanysyllables.com For Kim Merryman's contest

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Mark Martin

Date: 5/1/2017 7:41:00 AM

Different and entertaining. Congratulations on your win Sunshine smile! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2017 7:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/28/2017 8:34:00 PM

I enjoyed this cute Pleiades, Anne-Lise! It made me smile. Can't say that eating grilled mice appeals to me, but I do think mice are cute - especially cartoon mice. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, KIm

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2017 7:58:00 AM

- Nice to participate in your contest, Kim - Thank you for my 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/25/2017 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this clever piece Anne-lise! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2017 4:16:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit a 7 and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/24/2017 3:26:00 AM

Fun filled words! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2017 11:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2017 8:34:00 PM

Cute and that is an interesting word you chose there. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2017 11:37:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/23/2017 5:33:00 PM

I like the poem as a good read, but it needs a little seasoning... what goes with grilled mice? Some wine would be nice. A fun piece of poetry, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2017 4:07:00 AM

- This "aunt" does not drink wine ... she drinks home-made beer :)))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 4/23/2017 2:10:00 PM

I love this fun side to you Anna-Lise. Congratulations to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:30:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 9:26:00 AM

You are very caring, Sunshine, great poem and congratulations:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:30:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2017 8:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:31:00 AM

Grilled mice??? Ewww. Fun poem, Anne-Lise, congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 4/23/2017 4:00:00 AM

Just swinging by again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:28:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 4/22/2017 3:22:00 AM

A funny - but slightly disturbing - piece, Lisa :). Thematically reminds me of Roald Dahl!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2017 8:49:00 AM

- Roald Dahl is one of my favorite writers, John :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 4/21/2017 11:18:00 PM

A fun llittle verse, but not my favorite topic i have to say, me and mice, but surely my scream will scare him away? One would hope? Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Hugs and a 7

Maria Williams
Date: 4/24/2017 5:30:00 AM

Nooo!! these ones that I saw in the street didn't wear pretty clothes like these. Lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2017 8:53:00 AM

- Look at the picture, Maria ... that's sweet mouse .... :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2017 2:36:00 PM

this is a fun, invigorating work, anne.. still jetlagging.. happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:50:00 PM

- Relax in the weekend, Nette - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anil Deo

Date: 4/21/2017 1:10:00 PM

Loved the picture ... grilled mice might have to wait for Nuclear Winter (heaven forbid). How is aunty's health right now! Some - healthy - eating choices need long-term acquisition, LOL! enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:40:00 PM

:))))) I think she died many years ago of a "mouse virus", Anil :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 4/21/2017 12:07:00 PM

wow that was unexpected....but so much realness was reflected....simple things bring the greatest joy....and this selection is one i definitely enjoy.....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:44:00 PM

- Nice to see you, Eric :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

Date: 4/21/2017 3:00:00 AM

MMM, Most Marvellous! Methinks mice melt in the mouth! Haha! Wonderful job, Anne-Lise! GL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:46:00 PM

- I'll take spaghetti and meatballs ... do not like the taste of mice :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/20/2017 7:31:00 PM

A mouse in the room..where is the broom..good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:47:00 PM

- Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/20/2017 3:03:00 PM

Yummy! Sounds like aunty M was a pretty good cook??? Best wishes in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2017 2:49:00 PM

- She was a lousy cook .... could not cook tea water :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/20/2017 1:51:00 PM

I hope Walt Disney will not hear about the grilled one! Delightful Pleiades dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck with the contest my friend! A seven to go with!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 2:52:00 PM

- But "Mickey Mouse Dinner" might be a good idea :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/20/2017 11:35:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise!! Good Luck in the contest with this particular form. An interesting metaphor for sure -- but I'll pass on the Grilled Mice!! A very funny write indeed!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 11:52:00 AM

- I believe my "aunt" died of a small mouse virus ... many years ago :))) - Nice to see you my friend Gary :) - thank you for your visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 11:00:00 AM

Ummm..grilled mice...I'll pass but I'm glad I didn't pass on your wonderfully cute poem my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 11:48:00 AM

- .... and I am happy to be visited by you, Chris :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/20/2017 8:22:00 AM

Someone is in a playful mood...Anne-Lise:) One mouse is cute from afar ...the rest...excellent creativity:) A very sweet, fun picture! Wonderful writing:) lynnxxx sending you smiles.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 11:43:00 AM

- I do not like having mice in my house ... but I think mice are cute :) - Would not eat them :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2017 8:13:00 AM

Nice pleiades Anne..love the third line...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 11:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 4/20/2017 7:57:00 AM

I absolutely hate mice. I f there's one there's 4 more somewhere else. I had to deal with that twice when my neighbors started to renovate their homes. Your poem though, I do like. Good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2017 8:06:00 AM

- One mouse ... can quickly become many - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, PoetPrentice Dupins :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)