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Mice arrived in my house
Maybe you are afraid 
   My aunty eat grilled mice
   Must say that sounds nasty
   Mickey Mouse dinner ... no
Mild hands will protect you
More courageous than most











20.04.2017
Sun : - A-L Andresen :)
( Pleiades form : M )
www.howmanysyllables.com
For Kim Merryman's contest

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Mark Martin Date: 5/1/2017 7:41:00 AM Different and entertaining. Congratulations on your win Sunshine smile! :-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2017 7:56:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman Date: 4/28/2017 8:34:00 PM I enjoyed this cute Pleiades, Anne-Lise! It made me smile. Can't say that eating grilled mice appeals to me, but I do think mice are cute - especially cartoon mice. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, KIm Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2017 7:58:00 AM - Nice to participate in your contest, Kim - Thank you for my 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/25/2017 12:01:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this clever piece Anne-lise! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/25/2017 4:16:00 AM - Thank you for your visit a 7 and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh Date: 4/24/2017 3:26:00 AM Fun filled words! Congrats! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/24/2017 11:38:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2017 8:34:00 PM Cute and that is an interesting word you chose there. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/24/2017 11:37:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 4/23/2017 5:33:00 PM I like the poem as a good read, but it needs a little seasoning... what goes with grilled mice? Some wine would be nice. A fun piece of poetry, Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/24/2017 4:07:00 AM - This "aunt" does not drink wine ... she drinks home-made beer :)))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray Date: 4/23/2017 2:10:00 PM I love this fun side to you Anna-Lise. Congratulations to you too. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2017 2:30:00 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/23/2017 9:26:00 AM You are very caring, Sunshine, great poem and congratulations:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2017 2:30:00 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 4/23/2017 8:27:00 AM Congrats on your win Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2017 2:29:00 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/23/2017 7:31:00 AM Grilled mice??? Ewww. Fun poem, Anne-Lise, congrats on your win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2017 2:29:00 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels Date: 4/23/2017 4:00:00 AM Just swinging by again to congratulate you on your win! Regards, John. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2017 2:28:00 PM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels Date: 4/22/2017 3:22:00 AM A funny - but slightly disturbing - piece, Lisa :). Thematically reminds me of Roald Dahl!! Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2017 8:49:00 AM - Roald Dahl is one of my favorite writers, John :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 4/21/2017 11:18:00 PM A fun llittle verse, but not my favorite topic i have to say, me and mice, but surely my scream will scare him away? One would hope? Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Hugs and a 7 Login to Reply Maria Williams Date: 4/24/2017 5:30:00 AM Nooo!! these ones that I saw in the street didn't wear pretty clothes like these. Lol Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2017 8:53:00 AM - Look at the picture, Maria ... that's sweet mouse .... :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/21/2017 2:36:00 PM this is a fun, invigorating work, anne.. still jetlagging.. happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:50:00 PM - Relax in the weekend, Nette - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anil Deo Date: 4/21/2017 1:10:00 PM Loved the picture ... grilled mice might have to wait for Nuclear Winter (heaven forbid). How is aunty's health right now! Some - healthy - eating choices need long-term acquisition, LOL! enjoyed Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:40:00 PM :))))) I think she died many years ago of a "mouse virus", Anil :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie Date: 4/21/2017 12:07:00 PM wow that was unexpected....but so much realness was reflected....simple things bring the greatest joy....and this selection is one i definitely enjoy.....;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:44:00 PM - Nice to see you, Eric :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf Date: 4/21/2017 3:00:00 AM MMM, Most Marvellous! Methinks mice melt in the mouth! Haha! Wonderful job, Anne-Lise! GL Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:46:00 PM - I'll take spaghetti and meatballs ... do not like the taste of mice :) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker Date: 4/20/2017 7:31:00 PM A mouse in the room..where is the broom..good luck in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:47:00 PM - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 4/20/2017 3:03:00 PM Yummy! Sounds like aunty M was a pretty good cook??? Best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2017 2:49:00 PM - She was a lousy cook .... could not cook tea water :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/20/2017 1:51:00 PM I hope Walt Disney will not hear about the grilled one! Delightful Pleiades dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck with the contest my friend! A seven to go with! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 2:52:00 PM - But "Mickey Mouse Dinner" might be a good idea :) - Thank you for your visits a 7 and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 4/20/2017 11:35:00 AM Hello Anne-Lise!! Good Luck in the contest with this particular form. An interesting metaphor for sure -- but I'll pass on the Grilled Mice!! A very funny write indeed!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 11:52:00 AM - I believe my "aunt" died of a small mouse virus ... many years ago :))) - Nice to see you my friend Gary :) - thank you for your visit and your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 4/20/2017 11:00:00 AM Ummm..grilled mice...I'll pass but I'm glad I didn't pass on your wonderfully cute poem my friend. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 11:48:00 AM - .... and I am happy to be visited by you, Chris :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie Date: 4/20/2017 8:22:00 AM Someone is in a playful mood...Anne-Lise:) One mouse is cute from afar ...the rest...excellent creativity:) A very sweet, fun picture! Wonderful writing:) lynnxxx sending you smiles. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 11:43:00 AM - I do not like having mice in my house ... but I think mice are cute :) - Would not eat them :))) - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 4/20/2017 8:13:00 AM Nice pleiades Anne..love the third line... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 11:38:00 AM - Thank you for your visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poetprentice Dupins Date: 4/20/2017 7:57:00 AM I absolutely hate mice. I f there's one there's 4 more somewhere else. I had to deal with that twice when my neighbors started to renovate their homes. Your poem though, I do like. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2017 8:06:00 AM - One mouse ... can quickly become many - Thank you for your nice visits and comments, PoetPrentice Dupins :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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