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your sense of humor the darkness drifts through your eyes - never with a lie 06.10. 2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved SENRYU Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless 1st place in the contest howmanysyllables.com 5 - 7 - 5

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Weston Gregory

Date: 11/15/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thoughtful with a sense of obscurity yet revealing double edgedness of human nature. I think mirth do. This piece is really provocative.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:26:00 AM

- Thank you for your comment, Gregory :) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/30/2022 12:43:00 PM

Brilliant Senryu, Anne-Lise: Congrats on your 1st place win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:26:00 AM

- Thank you, SuZ :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/16/2022 8:35:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your first place win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:25:00 AM

- Thank you, Tania :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2022 9:15:00 AM

Back With my congrats to you on a top win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:25:00 AM

- Thank you, Andrea :) - hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/15/2022 5:55:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... wisdom-filled in your excellent poetic style. Thanks for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:25:00 AM

- Thank you for your comment, Beata :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 10/14/2022 7:26:00 PM

Gleams of true nature cannot help coming out of the fascade of put up appearance, at least once in a while . Great senryu and great image showing the duplicity of human nature. Congratulations Smile on your first place win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2022 2:24:00 AM

- Thank you for your comment, Valsa :) - hugs