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14.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Gurgling mountain streams the deer drink from mountain pools One eagles soar low raptors eyes powerful lens - relentlessly ground attack

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Date: 11/25/2024 10:45:00 AM
Anne-Lise, such is nature in the wild...you describe it well. I would hope we're wise enough to leave as pristine the tract like this that you describe. Smiles!
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Date: 11/16/2024 8:41:00 AM
Lovely deer and glad we do not have many eagles around us. Might see an odd one but rare. Love the picture and poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/15/2024 11:49:00 AM
Such a beautiful deer! How come someone attack it. Nice poem.
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Date: 11/15/2024 10:22:00 AM
You are so good at these short forms.. the use of words and imagery are just awesome...
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Date: 11/15/2024 8:53:00 AM
Oh my. I would not think they'd attack such a big animal!
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Date: 11/15/2024 9:49:00 AM
- In very special cases during the winter months, eagles can take deer and smaller reindeer, up to approx. 40 kg, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 11/15/2024 7:56:00 AM
Mother nature rules the roost, enjoyed reading your Tanka poem Anne. Xx
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Date: 11/15/2024 7:52:00 AM
Mother nature is beautiful but has no remorse
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Date: 11/15/2024 7:44:00 AM
Hi Anne, raptors fly low when they see a prey. They attack chicks and small rodents. The jungle law is 'might is right'. Well penned with a beautiful image. Love and hugs.
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Date: 11/15/2024 7:16:00 AM
Nature can be cruel at times but then again every creature has to eat to survive.. Enjoy the weekend Anne Lise. Tom
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Date: 11/15/2024 2:31:00 AM
Love the imagery and the photo!
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Date: 11/14/2024 5:58:00 PM
So true that nature can be both cruel and kind. A beautiful poem and picture. :) hugs
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