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Pose, sitting sideways in a chair. Ana Rosa:

Bring me to a place where the stars shine forever White lies, the beast is finally slowed down to zero I know the things are changed now, a last kiss 15.05.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Sijo : 12-13-10 Syllable www.howmanysyllables.com

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2017 8:58:00 PM

The last kiss is so sad It reminds me when I kissed my husband for the last time. Anyway it is agreat poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2017 8:09:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Darlene :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/3/2017 8:52:00 PM

Love the picture and the words even if they seem a little sad :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2017 6:09:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Debbie :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2017 4:37:00 PM

Sounds sad on this poem. A last kiss in itself is sad. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2017 2:00:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, Phyllis :) - Always nice to see you :) - greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/30/2017 4:14:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, This one its home very much. The words and images of "Last Kiss" speaks to dreams and the heart of eternity itself. A Fabulous Sijo!! Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/31/2017 12:59:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Gary :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 5/25/2017 7:45:00 AM

The beautiful image sets the scene for this sad and lovely poem of yours Anne-Lise, especially love the first line. ...Maria7+

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2017 7:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for lovely comments and a 7, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Semih Bilgic

Date: 5/25/2017 7:43:00 AM

very nice,alike you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2017 7:53:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Semih :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 5/24/2017 5:08:00 PM

Sad Anne-Lise. I'm sorry I missed the original version.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/25/2017 7:52:00 AM

- " the original version " .... ? ... - Where is the original version? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2017 6:14:00 PM

Very nice one to go with that picture. That picture is gorgeous!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2017 3:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2017 4:10:00 PM

Without any doubt, a sad and emotional poem, Anne-Lise. A last kiss stays imprinted for eternity. #7 Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2017 4:13:00 PM

- Many thanks for lovely comments and a 7, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 5/20/2017 12:16:00 PM

when the end is close....Heaven Only Knows....where the heart goes....Beautiful as always anne....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2017 12:20:00 PM

- A chapter over .... a new start - The beast is weakened to zero :) - Thank you very much, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Verlecia Fields

Date: 5/20/2017 10:40:00 AM

Made me think of changing relationships - changing understandings - changing bodies

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2017 12:12:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Verlecia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/20/2017 10:40:00 AM

Powerful and philosophical both, excellently said. A 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2017 12:11:00 PM

- Thank you for your nice comments and a 7, Bl :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 5/18/2017 5:14:00 PM

Beautiful. We go to that place where we can visualise the scene.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2017 2:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/18/2017 3:05:00 PM

Hello Anne. This is powerful and expressive. I love the voice and tone. The attached image you share is marvelous. The first line alone sets the tone that this should be read out loud. Well done entirely. Enjoy the night.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2017 2:50:00 AM

- Thank you for your nice comments, Lisa :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 5/18/2017 12:02:00 PM

This is lovely Anne-Lise! The picture is beautiful and I particularly love the first line.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2017 12:06:00 PM

- A peaceful place, Abosede :) - Many thanks for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/17/2017 1:28:00 AM

"No tears" made me tears with your beautiful pen. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2017 6:21:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/16/2017 6:46:00 PM

So beautiful, Anne-Lise ~*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2017 6:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/16/2017 4:49:00 PM

A last kiss is memorable from its sadness. So beautiful, Miss Anne-Lise. You are marvelous with your pen :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2017 6:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/16/2017 2:51:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, deep emotions felt when reading this sad yet beautiful sadness. Your gentleness always shines through in your writes and this gentleness is the beauty at the heart of your poetry Anne-Lise. An excellent write that touches the heart so softly yet stirs such deep emotions. May your pen ever run gold. This has to be a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2017 6:23:00 AM

- Mike, it's a big pleasure to receive a 7 and a fav. from you my friend :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)