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- Keep It Secret -

The aged priest did not worry
                                          about the latest fashion
                                     Beneath the ankle length cloak -
                                                 vulgar lingerie

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/31/2023 2:30:00 PM Got a chuckle but really it is a very sad thing that has happened and is happening to young people in some faiths. Thank you for sharing this political and religious work with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara K Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/29/2023 10:37:00 AM I chuckled with this one and congrats on your placement in the contest. love phyl Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 10/24/2023 12:55:00 PM This one made me smile.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2023 5:57:00 AM Wow! Prayboy…oh how sad…and his ulterior apparel! When people use religion instead of practicing their faith, he’ll is on the loose..funny and yet extremely serious. Congratulations Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/24/2023 5:12:00 AM Oh this is really humorous, gosh, made me laugh a lot, honestly, a very clever choice of theme for the contest and you definitely nailed it! Congratulations on the well deserved win, sending you love and hugs :) Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/24/2023 3:16:00 AM Dear Anne Lise, I must say you have great sense of humour! This made me laugh! Its not always one gets to make me laugh, through poetry, but this dodoitsu made me laugh truly! So creative and so well articulated! And that picture is so fitting and funny! I especially love the line “ beneath ankle length cloak, vulgar lingerie” lololol made my day! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved really! Also a fave for me Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/20/2023 8:28:00 AM Quite a funny take on the picture. Best for a win. Blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Valsa George Date: 10/19/2023 9:28:00 PM Quite humorous in keeping with the spirit of a dodoitsu. The picture is quite comical. All the Best on the contest.... dear Anne. Love and hugs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM - Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

The Situation Date: 10/19/2023 7:03:00 PM Sickening. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2023 1:23:00 AM - Even priests are human, T.S. - hugs

Eve Roper Date: 10/19/2023 5:48:00 PM Cute humorous poem, Anne-Lise, I hope you are feeling much better. God bless you. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM - Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 10/19/2023 2:28:00 PM this is so much fun, what an inspiration, thanks Anne Lise, for the smiles, enjoyed yann Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM - Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/19/2023 1:01:00 PM very funny, anne-lise! hope you're feeling better... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/19/2023 12:38:00 PM haha. Love how you used humor Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs

Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2023 12:06:00 PM ha ha ha love it and the pic is hilarious. I have a similar funny picture with 'play frog' drawn to go in my book:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 10/19/2023 10:55:00 AM Funny. Nicely penned Dodoitsu poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM - Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/19/2023 10:38:00 AM I enjoyed reading this fun Dodoitsu write/cute picture. I also did this one. Hope you get well fast. Hugs... Have a Blessed/Fun Day...... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM - Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 10/19/2023 10:16:00 AM I have met a few that really do make you scratch your head in disbelief. Well done. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 10/19/2023 9:55:00 AM Your Dodo Itsu is not only entertaining but also incredibly clever. I wish you the best of luck with the contest! Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM - Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Brenda J. Joyce Date: 10/19/2023 6:45:00 AM Oh my enjoyed your work Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2023 7:07:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joyce :) - hugs

Lin Lane Date: 10/19/2023 6:43:00 AM Reading “Prayboy!” With that look on his face? Hmmm. I hope you’re feeling better today, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2023 7:06:00 AM - A little better, thank you very much Lin :) - hugs