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18.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Dodoitsu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

1st place in the contest

The aged priest did not worry about the latest fashion Beneath the ankle length cloak - vulgar lingerie

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2023 2:30:00 PM

Got a chuckle but really it is a very sad thing that has happened and is happening to young people in some faiths. Thank you for sharing this political and religious work with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara K

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2023 10:37:00 AM

I chuckled with this one and congrats on your placement in the contest. love phyl

Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:55:00 PM

This one made me smile.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 5:57:00 AM

Wow! Prayboy…oh how sad…and his ulterior apparel! When people use religion instead of practicing their faith, he’ll is on the loose..funny and yet extremely serious. Congratulations

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:12:00 AM

Oh this is really humorous, gosh, made me laugh a lot, honestly, a very clever choice of theme for the contest and you definitely nailed it! Congratulations on the well deserved win, sending you love and hugs :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:16:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise, I must say you have great sense of humour! This made me laugh! Its not always one gets to make me laugh, through poetry, but this dodoitsu made me laugh truly! So creative and so well articulated! And that picture is so fitting and funny! I especially love the line “ beneath ankle length cloak, vulgar lingerie” lololol made my day! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved really! Also a fave for me

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 8:28:00 AM

Quite a funny take on the picture. Best for a win. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 10/19/2023 9:28:00 PM

Quite humorous in keeping with the spirit of a dodoitsu. The picture is quite comical. All the Best on the contest.... dear Anne. Love and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs

The Situation

Date: 10/19/2023 7:03:00 PM

Sickening.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2023 1:23:00 AM

- Even priests are human, T.S. - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/19/2023 5:48:00 PM

Cute humorous poem, Anne-Lise, I hope you are feeling much better. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:28:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/19/2023 2:28:00 PM

this is so much fun, what an inspiration, thanks Anne Lise, for the smiles, enjoyed yann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/19/2023 1:01:00 PM

very funny, anne-lise! hope you're feeling better...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2023 12:38:00 PM

haha. Love how you used humor

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2023 12:06:00 PM

ha ha ha love it and the pic is hilarious. I have a similar funny picture with 'play frog' drawn to go in my book:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 10/19/2023 10:55:00 AM

Funny. Nicely penned Dodoitsu poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 10:38:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this fun Dodoitsu write/cute picture. I also did this one. Hope you get well fast. Hugs... Have a Blessed/Fun Day......

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/19/2023 10:16:00 AM

I have met a few that really do make you scratch your head in disbelief. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2023 9:55:00 AM

Your Dodo Itsu is not only entertaining but also incredibly clever. I wish you the best of luck with the contest! Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 8:25:00 AM

how entertaining and clever your Dodo Itsu is...best wishes with the contest, Sara PS Have a pleasant day :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2023 10:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Joyce Faure

Date: 10/19/2023 6:45:00 AM

Oh my enjoyed your work

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 7:07:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joyce :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 10/19/2023 6:43:00 AM

Reading “Prayboy!” With that look on his face? Hmmm. I hope you’re feeling better today, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 7:06:00 AM

- A little better, thank you very much Lin :) - hugs