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Give me an apple from my garden Red and juicy An aromatic, fresh taste In the apple's stomach, many small apple children A smell of summer and sunshine They are cheaper today, compared with the price on an apple in the garden of Eden Have you thought about that, Isaac Newton ? An apple to the day, keeps the doctor away 23.03.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved * Kanzi, means 'hidden treasure' in Swahili

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Date: 3/26/2018 11:46:00 PM
Fabulous image. Don't you bite me or I'll bite back kind of apple...lol. x
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:53:00 PM
- Be careful ... sharp teeth, Leanne :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2018 5:02:00 PM
Love learning new things dear sostre! Thank you!
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:51:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2018 6:35:00 AM
...an apple a day keeps the doctor away BUT if the doctor is cute...the hell with the fruit! Haha! Very well done my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs P.S.: It will take some time before I eat another apple because of the picture! haha!
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Date: 3/26/2018 5:01:00 PM
Lolol too funny Demetrios!
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Date: 3/26/2018 6:43:00 AM
- You have to choose a "cute" apple ... and share it with your doctor :) - Many thanks my friend, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2018 4:40:00 AM
That apple is going to give me nightmares for sure, lol, just joking. I really like your take on this Anne-Lise, indeed it is one to ponder on....Maria xxx
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:51:00 PM
- Nice girls sweet apples, Maria :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2018 2:26:00 AM
Excellent and thought provoking write. Although your picture is scary. hahahha. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:49:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 5:10:00 PM
you charm me with apples and gravity, anne... wow.. happy huggs
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:49:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 10:52:00 AM
Don't think I wanna bite out of that one. Enjoyed the write Anne-Lise, have a good Sunday...
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:00:00 PM
- Charlie, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 10:13:00 AM
Interesting thoughts Anne Lise...
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Date: 3/25/2018 1:00:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 7:48:00 AM
from the picture smiling a dangerous looking apple anne lise your pen shone beautifully wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:59:00 PM
- Yes, I must confess that it looks scary ... I would never eat it, Liam :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 2:21:00 AM
made me smile, Anne-Lise, a fun but thoughtful write. Viv x
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:57:00 PM
- I love your smile, Viv ... many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2018 12:20:00 AM
I try to eat an apple every day. We are safer than Adam and Eve were! Stimulating poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:56:00 PM
- No punishment for eating an apple today, enjoy your apple Matthew :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2018 1:49:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , Apple for thought ,, your pic is a very scary apple my friend :::)))) hugs~~~Niall
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:54:00 PM
- Just eat "kind and smiling apples" - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2018 9:52:00 AM
Hmm.. Lovely poem :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:52:00 PM
- Sakshi, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 9:07:00 PM
Definitely causes the reader to think but that image might keep me from ever eating an apple again. :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:52:00 PM
- Eat your apple with joy and pleasure, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 8:30:00 PM
Anne-Lise, an intriguing and thought provoking poem full of meaningful artistry.. Lovely! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:50:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 6:59:00 PM
love the image and the poem is quite thought provoking Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:50:00 PM
- Jan, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 6:33:00 PM
Excellent poem. Thought provoking, visual and artistic.
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:49:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 5:54:00 PM
nice poem interesting picture, love apples
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:49:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 5:31:00 PM
An interesting verse Sunshine.Did Eve tempt Adam, did an apple really fall on Isaac Newton. Food for thought ,excuse the pun. Tom
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:48:00 PM
- Yes, what is true ... what is fictional ... many questions we will never get an answer to, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 5:23:00 PM
Not the kind that falls on heads...He must have contemplated many scenarios...but for sure there's sunshine there in...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2018 3:51:00 PM
A unique theme..among its many attributes falling apple helped discover gravity.. as you refer, Anne Lise.
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:08:00 PM
- An aha moment :) - Did an apple really fall on Isaac Newton's head ? :) - He was mathematician, astronomer, theologian, author and physicist a very wise man, Vijay :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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