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A small miracle When you kiss my lips tenderly my heart feels like a volcano The earth spins around like a carousel ........ ....... ........ ....... Kiss me one more time 09.04.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:54:00 PM

"A small miracle" This reminds me of my VERY FAVORITE WRITER> Charles Bukowski. Many love or hate him, but from me this is the highest of literacy compliments!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 5:59:00 AM

- (He's my grandfather! ..... No, I'm just kidding !!!! :)) - Thank you for reading my poem, really appreciate your comments, JSL. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Meyer

Date: 9/17/2013 12:32:00 AM

Anne, I wish I could capture the feeling myself....what a beautiful kiss in my mind!..definitely I am already charmed...your friend, Wendy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/17/2013 12:00:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, my friend Wendy! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 8/28/2013 8:00:00 AM

What an interesting and passionate poem ..Thanks Anne. I thoroughly enjoyed. JM

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2013 9:48:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Joseph, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Heather Secrest

Date: 6/22/2013 4:18:00 PM

This is beutiful!! I hope this is what kissing feels like when my parents finally let me. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2013 4:55:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Heather, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nishita Karulkar

Date: 6/9/2013 6:54:00 AM

Small, sweet n lovely poem.. :) - Nishita (nishu).. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2013 6:55:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my poem, really appreciate your comments, Nishu. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/4/2013 6:59:00 PM

lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/5/2013 1:35:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my poem, really appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/27/2013 8:39:00 PM

Simple yet a beautiful picture you paint with your words....well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 1:47:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mustapha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Sallam Yassin

Date: 5/15/2013 3:12:00 AM

Kiss is what making the earth going around and around sweet kiss Anne thanks 2 share!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 6:59:00 AM

- Sallam, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Caleah Buil

Date: 5/13/2013 2:03:00 PM

Just all around a sweet poem. I really liked it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2013 2:49:00 PM

- Caleah, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Shining Bright

Date: 4/19/2013 3:22:00 PM

Lovely Ode to Kiss.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 1:33:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Persian, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bateson

Date: 4/19/2013 10:32:00 AM

That poem feels so good..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2013 10:34:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Betty, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/17/2013 4:16:00 AM

This is another wonderful poem of yours which I like so much giving me a terrific lovely feeling while reading it! Hmmnnn...Thank you so much my dearest friend! I wish you again a lovely day as well! May God bless you and your love ones always!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2013 4:23:00 AM

Enjoyable with a visit from you sweet Leonora, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason

Date: 4/16/2013 11:29:00 AM

awe wow i love this poem, im only 15, but thats how my first kiss felt feb 16th of this year

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2013 11:35:00 AM

... a sweet kiss, Danielle. <3 - Enjoyable with a visit from you, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/13/2013 6:17:00 PM

OK X Lovely Anne Lise, you write some great things, Take care, Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2013 4:15:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem. - Welcome back another time, Richard :) oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/13/2013 12:42:00 PM

Surely It's a valuable passionate kiss. Wonderfully worded with your rhythm of heart. Thanks........., loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2013 12:44:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you bl, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Stephanie Weeks

Date: 4/13/2013 10:43:00 AM

Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2013 10:45:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Stephanie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/13/2013 6:53:00 AM

You must be kissing a great kisser! Very nice work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2013 9:08:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Matthew, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey

Date: 4/13/2013 5:37:00 AM

I love this clever 'ode' to a kiss. I penned one some time ago called "What Is A Kiss'. I think you'll like it.... Thanks for your many comments.... Love ya.... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2013 5:40:00 AM

Enjoyable with a visit from you John, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 4/12/2013 12:27:00 PM

Wow thank you for a Verse example and about a kiss too. Can be bitter or sour and sweet or passionate. My email is jmendoza517@yahoo.com and just introduce yourself, thanks...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 12:36:00 PM

Enjoyable with a visit from you Jacqueline, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/12/2013 11:52:00 AM

Have a good weekend, Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 11:56:00 AM

Wish you the same,Caleb ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/12/2013 11:04:00 AM

Lovely~*~SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 11:10:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Skat, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donald Williams

Date: 4/12/2013 9:53:00 AM

Stopping by again, I love this one, thank you so much for sharing and wow a kiss to remember :D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 10:03:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Donald, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/12/2013 9:52:00 AM

then again and again, lovely poetry enjoyed this...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 10:02:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Harry, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson

Date: 4/12/2013 4:53:00 AM

yes a kiss we send to you, sweet lady of the north, happiness we want 4 two, where love is flowing forth...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 5:05:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Don, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 4/12/2013 2:40:00 AM

hhhmmmm I like that :) a nice feeling..thanks for sharing this lovely write of your friend Anne Lise..:) have a nice day..hugs, Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2013 2:59:00 AM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you Maria, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)