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The demons of the night have doubled the unsaved are simply in terrible trouble Moist mist, death, stinky rats and ash Haunting malicious, they come in a blinding flash Shadows of human beings as dark silhouettes you're so close, I can smell your cigarette A living nightmare or just ugly makeup even the cat that slept on a velvet pillow wakes up 27.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 2nd place in the contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/11/2020 12:17:00 PM

Wonderful eerie images, Anne-Lise. Your cigarette reference reminds me of a chandelier my cousins bought in New Orleans. Every so often they would smell cigarette smoke and cheap perfume in the dining room until one day told the "spirit" to go down to the French market where it belonged. Never happened again! Congratulations on your win!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/7/2020 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this spooky poem, Anne-Lise. Love the picture. // Barry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2020 10:41:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Barry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 11/7/2020 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem and your placement well deserved.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2020 10:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2020 1:06:00 AM

Back with my congrats on your win Anne. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2020 10:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Tom :) - H.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/6/2020 11:55:00 AM

So very spooky it gives one chills! :0 Yet, it was frightfully thrilling to read. Congratulations on your fine winning entry, Anne-Lise. :=) Evelyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 12:07:00 PM

- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/6/2020 11:54:00 AM

I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 12:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/6/2020 10:39:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this wonderful poem_ Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 11:17:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/6/2020 2:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your great placement!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra

Date: 11/6/2020 1:01:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congrats on a winning ride. Loved the poem. Love and Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/5/2020 1:42:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your scary poem, great imagery!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2020 2:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for my place on your winner list, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/1/2020 10:02:00 AM

Really scary and creative, I'm sure Tania will love this hectic imagery and spooky tale. You have created a brilliant write, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2020 11:03:00 AM

- I hope Tania likes it ... thank you for liking it ... thank you for your words and wishes, dear sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/29/2020 5:19:00 PM

That dog in the picture sure is brave. The 'guy-demon' scares the bejeebers out of me! ~ Long Gone

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 2:58:00 AM

- Yes, a brave dog, Gershon ... (I wish it was a cat ... would have suited my poem better :))) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2020 9:47:00 AM

I liked this line: you're so close, I can smell your cigarette

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 2:55:00 AM

- Too close ... Kim :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/27/2020 10:29:00 PM

Oh wow, you have wrote this gem so well, Love it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 5:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2020 5:37:00 PM

oh YES< you did that very nice and spooky, my friend!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 5:41:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/27/2020 5:17:00 PM

Halloween perfection in this poem, Anne-Lise. ...and a spooky picture to top it off :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 2:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/27/2020 3:18:00 PM

I enjoyed the rhyme and the creepy imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 5:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/27/2020 2:57:00 PM

Well done on the creepy setting, Anne-Lise. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

W.A. Cholt

Date: 10/27/2020 2:05:00 PM

There's a nice eerie., scary atmosphere to this poem. Well written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 5:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, W.A. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emilia James

Date: 10/27/2020 1:32:00 PM

This is really spooky and the image is terrifying. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, Emilia : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/27/2020 1:05:00 PM

This is a wonderful short movie, Anne-Lise!! Music doubles the shadows of terrible sights! This is a top piece in my list!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 1:11:00 PM

- I think I choose your list, Newton :))) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2020 6:45:00 AM

"A living nightmare or just ugly makeup". I like that line. LOL..There are real demons out there who wish to do you harm and lead you the wrong way. Reads like a good contender for the contest. I like the last line also. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 7:15:00 AM

- When day turns to night, Sara ... witchcraft is broken, the dark spirits appear - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/27/2020 6:38:00 AM

Very apt for the season--spookiness skillfully delivered, Anne-Lise--all the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 7:10:00 AM

- After dark ... whatever the season, Vijay ... the spirits are released - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2020 6:18:00 AM

oh that image is spooky and so is your poem!! Eight very scary lines..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 7:08:00 AM

- A little bit ... of what the darkness can hide, S.O. :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/27/2020 6:10:00 AM

Spooky imagery, Anne-lise, just as required :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 7:05:00 AM

- as ordered ... and delivered, Jo :) - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)