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His eye was wetter than rain scouted for meaning on the bottom of the eternal lake All he could see was a sunken ship - storage place for grief and loss a wistful lament he was not in the mood to sing 27.10. 2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2022 7:27:00 AM

WoW! Anne-Lise, You’ve penned a well-written emotive write for the contest. Good imagery as well. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis

Valsa George

Date: 10/28/2022 4:46:00 AM

Sad emotions so powerfully conveyed ! This sinks deep into the heart. All the Best, dear Smile ! Love and Hugs !

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/27/2022 9:16:00 PM

Wonderful and visual, love it. Harry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/27/2022 1:40:00 PM

this is wonderful, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/27/2022 1:17:00 PM

In the depths indeed. Some stay there. They allow no one to rescue or comfort them. Great first line, my friend!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/27/2022 10:54:00 AM

Emotions so beautifully conveyed, Anne-Lise: a sunken ship - storage place for grief and loss...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:23:00 AM

- Life can be so incredibly vulnerable and completely incomprehensible sometimes, Vijay - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2022 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful verse with great imagery and sad feeling. Love the artist look in your avatar. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings to you my friend and wishes come true.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:19:00 AM

- "Big boys" cry too ... showing emotion is not a sign of weakness ... quite the contrary - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes, Eve :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2022 9:59:00 AM

I like the story you created to go with the picture, Ann Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 10:31:00 AM

... the poem came first :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/27/2022 8:40:00 AM

Anne-Lise, my dear friend, you have written a poem that is exceptional and extremely skillfully composed. "His eye was wetter than rain" so beautiful. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for lovely comment and blessings, Las :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2022 7:57:00 AM

Interesting poem. I loved the first line. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:10:00 AM

- Many thanks my faithful friend, Victor :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/27/2022 6:51:00 AM

Outstanding, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2022 11:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for the kind words and blessings, my friend :) - hugs