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The discouragement do not let go Every step on this journey feels unbearable The mountains rise - give me strength Saints and justice salvation and love Crawl for the truth settlement with sin a face - a facade My body hurts - but I do not care One of the weapons looked innocent But, price very high an inner struggle The heavy air must be blown away Empty gloomy thoughts - discouraged to fall A place to breathe my "reset" button 10/04/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Anacreontic Verse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 1st place in the contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I need a "reset" button. Do you have an extra one???? Have a blessed day with your win...............

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2021 3:06:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2021 12:18:00 PM

Recovery can be a long and painful path but when you find that place to breathe it can reset everything - congratulations on your win~

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/29/2021 9:44:00 AM

Yes, sometimes we fall, only to gain more strength to get back up and face whatever we are going through. Wonderful message for the ones needing strength and encouragement. Congratulations.

Silent One

Date: 7/29/2021 6:51:00 AM

Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/19/2021 2:01:00 PM

Think I totally need that reset button and send in that fresh air without all the clowns. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2021 2:57:00 AM

- Many thanks Phyllis, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/12/2021 7:00:00 PM

Really good Anne-Lise, there’s times we all need a place to breathe and a reset button to press. Best wishes for the contest... Belle :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2021 1:51:00 AM

- Many thanks Belle, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/11/2021 7:01:00 PM

A place to breathe my reset button!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2021 1:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for the comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2021 10:11:00 AM

This is one of my favourite poem for the contest. You'll do better than me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 1:09:00 PM

- Victor, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/11/2021 8:17:00 AM

Agony and despair hand in hand but the human spirit will withstand all adversities and emerge victoriously! Fine writing that reveals the inner struggle at moments of uncertainty! Hugs, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2021 1:11:00 AM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/11/2021 4:43:00 AM

we all need a place to breathe, and so press that reset button for me too lovie, together we can go visit the high mountains and the seas, even if its only through poetry, Much love dear Sunshine, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 7:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/11/2021 4:23:00 AM

Beautiful writing Anne-Lise, I don’t believe there is a reset button, but definitely we can sit back and take stock, Cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 7:47:00 AM

- Many thanks David, for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/10/2021 8:43:00 PM

Deep yet peaceful when you reset. Love the verse, Anne-Lise. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 7:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/10/2021 8:07:00 PM

Wow, powerful poetry here. LOve it Anne-lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 7:47:00 AM

- Harry, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/10/2021 3:52:00 PM

Sometimes we all need to set our reset button by doing whatever we need to do to rest from everyday life. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me ..Way to go. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 7:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2021 2:21:00 PM

Be great if we could just do that, reset. But we must never give give up hope. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 2:56:00 AM

- Never, Tom :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/10/2021 2:07:00 PM

Introspective write Anne-Lise. You painted emotions wonderfully. I like the turn your poem takes towards the end.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2021 2:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comments and friendly visit, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/10/2021 1:01:00 PM

well done, anne-lise! i love the hopefulness at the end. best of luck in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2021 1:09:00 PM

- I try to make it look bright in the end ... there is always a hope, Ilene :) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/10/2021 12:59:00 PM

WoW! Anne-Lise, I've seen good entries for the contest; yours was no exception. I have no clue what to write for this contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2021 1:08:00 PM

- I had to google some Examples of Anacreontic verses, Alexis ... have never heard of this form - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)