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An inferno of thoughts and chaos No one sees that the smile does not reach the eyes A fortress built by betrayal When the words are pronounced, they can no longer be withdrawn A devilish and poisonous voice sings to me the influence of the words is decisive Impossible to fight this dark force In his presence a putrefaction, stench, fire and dark smoke A glimpse into hell - is a fact 09.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Hell Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori 8th place in the contest

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/23/2023 12:18:00 AM

Only if we pass over our integral choice often By lazyness or by curiosity we venture to Where we are at risk, There can be hereditary Causes, that place people close to that Influence yet we can turn away if we Know of Jesus.'

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2023 2:58:00 AM

- We are responsible for our own actions, Joe ... many thanks for your comment - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/11/2023 5:01:00 PM

Makes me shiver. A devilish description of such an evil abode. Your words are kindred to a warning to us all. Best of luck in the macabre contest Anne-lise

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2023 6:04:00 AM

An excellent thought provoking write so true, a glimpse a into hell is a fact, but I reel back and retract my steps in fact run away as far away from this as I can. I know I have come across the devil in a nightmare whilst in hospital I woke up screaming, woke up all the ward who were grumpy and two nurses who told me in kind words to shut up . I can defy the devil I feel strong enough to do so but in a nightmare I felt vulnerable . Deep feelings my friend take care hugs and love jenny

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/10/2023 5:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/10/2023 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your Imagism Hell write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/10/2023 9:36:00 AM

To be in hell well is hellish! I choose heaven!

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/10/2023 9:22:00 AM

I didn’t know you had it in you, Sunshine :) Dark Devilish… Congrats!!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/10/2023 6:35:00 AM

Anne, you really impressed me with how well you handled this poem. That photo is really well picked as well...! Seems like a winner to me. Good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2023 7:42:00 AM

- I think many people read the title ... and move on ... "hell" is not something we talk about ... but "hell" is mentioned many times in the Bible - Thanks for the great comment, Las :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/10/2023 3:48:00 AM

I would not have imagined that Hell deserved such a beautiful poem, my dearest Anne-Lise. Good luck. You deserve it. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2023 7:39:00 AM

- A place where even weeds don't grow ... doesn't deserve much, Demetrios ... I agree - But thanks for reading it anyway :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/9/2023 3:17:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, This is a different type of poem. I enjoyed the read. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2023 10:43:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, yes this is far down to depth. Your welcome. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2023 7:35:00 AM

- A different poem indeed, Darlene ... and a different theme ... this is "far down in the depths" - Thanks for reading it :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/9/2023 12:23:00 PM

You did a great job with this one, Anne. A cool picture too! reads like a winner to me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2023 12:38:00 PM

- A dark theme... what is hell? ... who knows ? ... many thanks for your comment, Daniel :) - hugs