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You wait patiently and helplessly Like a thief, death creeps closer and closer The pain is too much to bear When the battle is over You will feel love and comfort The water drops hang in the air ... or is it tears (Written to my father in law, who is seriously ill) 20.04.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/28/2018 11:50:00 AM

Hope your father in law has a speedy recovery. Nice poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2018 12:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/25/2018 9:45:00 PM

Jack Kerouac wrote "it all ends in tears, anyway" Hope your father in law has a speedy recovery. Nice poem! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2018 12:32:00 AM

- Thanks, Matthew - // Anne-Lise

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/24/2018 7:02:00 AM

A bittersweet moment! My grandma had a tear roll from her eye as she died.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2018 7:53:00 AM

- He's not dead - but, seriously ill, Kim - Thanks - // Anne-Lise

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/23/2018 8:34:00 PM

Lovely sentiments, dearly expressed. Here's hoping that your father-in-law's pain decreases and that there's a positive outcome! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2018 4:20:00 AM

- Thanks, Gershon - // Anne-Lise

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2018 1:20:00 AM

The beauty and sensitivity the verse was written certainly excludes tears! Marvelous dea, Ann-Lise! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2018 7:18:00 AM

- Thanks, Demetrios - // Anne-Lise

Jean Murray

Date: 4/21/2018 6:22:00 PM

Tears for sure. Such a sad time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2018 7:18:00 AM

- Thanks, Jean - // Anne-Lise

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/21/2018 4:51:00 PM

I am sorry to hear about your father in law, Anne-Lise. Lovely poem for him. I am sending you and your family good thoughts.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2018 7:17:00 AM

- Thanks, Agnes - // Anne-Lise

Maria Williams

Date: 4/21/2018 6:34:00 AM

I am so sorry to hear this Anne-Lise, healing prayers sent your way sweet lady....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:41:00 AM

- Thanks, Maria - // Anne-Lise

Elaine George

Date: 4/21/2018 5:49:00 AM

He is in my prayers, lovely lady. Sincerely, Elaine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:40:00 AM

- Thanks, Elaine - // Anne-Lise

Bette Bavington

Date: 4/20/2018 10:00:00 PM

It is a tough time. I will keep all of you in my prayers.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:39:00 AM

- Thanks, Bette - // Anne-Lise

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2018 8:58:00 PM

I'm so sorry to know that your family has this difficult hill to climb. Love and prayers :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:39:00 AM

- Thanks, Carrie - // Anne-Lise

Timothy Carter

Date: 4/20/2018 7:49:00 PM

My prayers for you and family, all will be well, faith is important now. TAC

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:38:00 AM

- Thanks, Timothy - // Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2018 7:31:00 PM

healing prayers for the complete recovery of your father-in-law, anne... a divine hymn from you... tight huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:38:00 AM

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Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/20/2018 3:39:00 PM

Hope he can recover from sickness soon, Lise.. :O) Prayers for your father-in-law. This is so sweet write for him. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:37:00 AM

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2018 3:37:00 PM

aww so sorry to hear your news Anne-Lise, my thoughts are with you all:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2018 6:37:00 AM

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Niall Fulham

Date: 4/20/2018 2:32:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , sorry to hear , I will say a prayer my friend~~Niall

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2018 3:07:00 PM

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2018 2:14:00 PM

Thoughts and prayers for his speedy recovery..your kindness shows, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2018 3:06:00 PM

- Thanks, Vijay - // Anne-Lise

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2018 12:56:00 PM

Life can be cruel Sunshine, a lovely verse you have written for him. I hope that he is comfortable, and I know he'll be surrounded by his loved ones. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2018 3:06:00 PM

- Thanks, Tom - // Anne-Lise

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/20/2018 12:43:00 PM

May he be comforted in his pain...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2018 3:06:00 PM

- Thanks, Arturo - // Anne-Lise