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06.07.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul

1st place in the contest

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/22/2025 7:46:00 AM

WOW, I haven't even read it yet and here I am with WOW from just looking. I cannot decipher what the wee marks are, perhaps 'n' with small font? How did you use different fonts? So creative. OK, let me read. LOVE IT. I must have a block disallowing me to see designing options on keyboards. FUN FUN ... CayCay

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/21/2025 1:42:00 PM

Anne-Lise. This is so well done. You’ve chosen the words perfectly. In some sense there are aspects of our own lives that are similar. We’re all passengers of the wind to some extent. Smiles!!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/19/2025 9:35:00 PM

Loved the creativity in this fine winner. Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/18/2025 10:10:00 AM

I love the artistic and creative write. Wow this is awesome my friend. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2025 2:43:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/16/2025 9:17:00 PM

Beautiful thought, artistic write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 7/16/2025 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win in this contest dear poet friend with a cute metaphorical piece with a creative illustrative shape. Wishing you a cheerful day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2025 10:55:00 AM

I remember this one. So good. Congrats

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/16/2025 10:08:00 AM

Oh nice, I like this one! The poem is great! Xo

Trina Layne

Date: 7/16/2025 7:11:00 AM

Very creative interpretation, Anne-Lise!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/11/2025 6:08:00 PM

A poet and an artist of shape. This needs no imagination by the reader to see the exploding dandelion. Beautifully done and so well expressed, being a passenger of the wind. You are truly gifted, my lovely friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/8/2025 10:02:00 PM

This is amazing, Anne-Lise, and a fave for me! :)

Valsa George

Date: 7/8/2025 9:45:00 PM

Dandelion seeds, passengers of the wind! Love it and love the artistry. All the Best dear Anne! Hugs...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2025 12:59:00 PM

This is awesome!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/8/2025 10:07:00 AM

Ooh…great! Fave!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/8/2025 4:08:00 AM

Anne-Lise, so creative and beautiful. - hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2025 4:41:00 PM

Creative one which are not easy to do plus the educational lines of the Haiku. I enjoyed reading it. If it was written for a contest, it reads and looks like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K