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Categories: beauty - nature - winter - life - death

Wintry river

swans on frozen lake ice crystals melt in sun rays - death ... takes the weakest Three Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings ~ 1st place in the contest ~ 29.10.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/4/2018 10:16:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, such a beautiful Haiku, in the depths of its sadness. Your words convey such deep emotion my friend. This winning write goes into my Haiku faves. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful Sunday. hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 12:40:00 PM

- Many thanks for your valuable fav. and comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2018 7:27:00 PM

Beautiful and sad, Sunshine, congratulations on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting my poem and a friendly congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/3/2018 12:23:00 PM

Sun, congratulations on your win in my contest and what a beautiful image!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/3/2018 9:30:00 AM

Spellbinding haiku. Congratulations on your win! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 11/2/2018 1:46:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Anne-Lise. Sending all the best and a huge hug your way~ Warren.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2018 6:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith

Date: 11/2/2018 7:26:00 AM

Just lovely Ann Lise, congrats. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2018 7:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting my poem and a friendly congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2018 4:11:00 AM

Many congrats Anne Lise I knew this was a top place winner as soon as I read it:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2018 4:41:00 AM

- A big surprise for me ... many thanks, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/1/2018 11:54:00 PM

love it,well deserved placing...Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2018 1:49:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2018 8:08:00 PM

VERY nicely done, Sunshine. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2018 1:49:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2018 2:58:00 PM

Indeed you paint a beautiful image, Anne-Lise, and I love the end line, even though it's so sad! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2018 5:02:00 AM

- Many thanks, greatly appreciate your comment Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/30/2018 3:26:00 AM

Sunshine, your words go so beautifully with the photo. This poem displays your amazing artistry -- the ability to absorb nature's beauty and describe a breathtaking image in just three lines. Awesome work, dear. Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:34:00 PM

- Always nice to see you, Carolyn ... many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/30/2018 3:07:00 AM

So beautiful and sad :(

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:32:00 PM

- Many thanks, greatly appreciate your comment Arthur:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/29/2018 9:44:00 PM

Your expressive poem reflects the beauty and reality of Nature.. a superb haiku, Anne-Lise. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:16:00 PM

- Nobody avoids death ... but the weakest may not survive winter ... - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/29/2018 3:57:00 PM

Nicely done, good luck.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:14:00 PM

- Many thanks Pashang, for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/29/2018 2:47:00 PM

The mystery and the beauty of nature expressed in a wonderful haiku Anne-Lise... excellent xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Live and die ... enjoy the moments, Mike :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 10/29/2018 11:16:00 AM

Thus is the truth of nature....excellent write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:12:00 PM

- Many thanks, always nice to see you John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 10/29/2018 11:11:00 AM

Brilliant haiku, Anne-Lise. The last line took me by surprise. Sending hugs your way~Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:11:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, Warren :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/29/2018 7:56:00 AM

Excellent write my dear friend...and love that pic...love & light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:10:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/29/2018 7:11:00 AM

Superbly written! Marvelous photo dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:10:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/29/2018 6:48:00 AM

Those swans look so beautiful..beauty well captured in your words, Anne-Lise. Death is a big contrast..but that is life.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2018 2:09:00 PM

- Swans are beautiful, Vijay :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/29/2018 3:50:00 AM

And a beautiful hakiu too Sunshine. Good luck. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2018 8:05:00 AM

- Many thanks Tom, greatly appreciate your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/29/2018 3:03:00 AM

nature can be so cruel:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/29/2018 8:04:00 AM

- Such is the life of us humans as well, Jan - The strongest survives most - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)