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This is what It would look like when a fire elemental is preparing to fight and/or use their powers

The world so breezy Everything seems so creepy Hiding in the corners of fear Lose attitude and pride with tears All the beautiful dreams we had at night what's the point since you never will fight Pain builds mountain inside of me, all I see is blood Screaming shouting og endless echos behind a flood We all know that everything has gone wrong I can not even explain with a poem or a sad song Stop the carousel it makes me sick and strange Our beautiful nature in negative change 12.08.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thoughts after reading: Ravi Sathasivam - Poem: "Global warming" -

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Maria Williams

Date: 8/15/2017 12:22:00 AM

A poem that elicits a lot of thought Anne-Lise. Indeed Nature is in crisis. So good to know that people like you are behind the push to make people aware. Akkiina is also spreading the word with my poem 'For Shame'. A Fave from me...Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2017 3:24:00 AM

- Yes, Akkina told me about it - a nice thing to do :) - I really appreciate your "fav.", visit and comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/14/2017 2:15:00 PM

Sad truth expressed so beautifully in this thought provoking poem, Anne-Lise. Excellent write. An instant fave. Love and smiles.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit, for a "fav." and your lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/14/2017 7:38:00 AM

Sad truth which sadly can't be changed, well expressed, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2017 1:21:00 PM

- Jo, many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 3:12:00 AM

Sigh... This poem is poem is penned beautifully. Well done for the insight write. Thanks for posting.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2017 3:41:00 AM

- Afolabi, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2017 2:39:00 PM

sadly, it is true, anne... splendid work as always... happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 3:15:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2017 1:06:00 PM

I feel the same

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 3:13:00 PM

- Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/13/2017 7:18:00 AM

It's sad to see the negative changes taking place..powerful write Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 3:13:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/13/2017 5:00:00 AM

This is an awesome write my friend! You have successfully written in rhyme Ann-Lise, Awesome job! You are right, we ar destroying the only place we can live in...I hope we will see the errors of our ways and try to fix what we have done...if it's even fixable! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 5:12:00 AM

- :))) ... not often I write in rhyme, Russell :))) ... I'm bad to rhyme in English - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2017 6:34:00 PM

Destroying God's creation is the most heinous of crimes for it destroys the human race as well! When are we going to realize the dangers we have put ourselves and life in general! Your dynamic and beautiful poem my friend, Anne-Lise is a call to our slumbering consciousness. Hopefully we are going to wake up before our dreams become a huge nightmare! God bless you! hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 5:24:00 AM

- You have written several poems about the same theme, my friend - I hope it's useful and we get our eyes up - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/12/2017 6:09:00 PM

So intense and fearful. We have indeed failed our Maker, but wonder of wonder he still loves us and tells us "Be Not Afraid."

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 5:18:00 AM

- Sunlite, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/12/2017 4:56:00 PM

We can make a difference Anne-Lise...starting with this great verse...plus one word at a time...god bless...(((HUGS)))...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 5:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 8/12/2017 4:36:00 PM

I'm not aware of your religious beliefs, Anne-Lise, but I believe God made beautiful things on the Earth, and yes, humans have spoiled it, but God has the power to restore, and He will. I can feel your sorrow, not only in your poetry, but it rings clear in your replies to comments. Keep your sunshine smile in tact.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2017 5:16:00 AM

- We must accept and respect each other Lin, no reason to be offended - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 4:45:00 PM

He's definitely disappointed with so many things, but man cannot govern himself, nor have we been good caretakers. But, one day it will all be as beautiful as it was in the beginning. My beliefs may offend some, but it's not my intention to do so.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2017 4:40:00 PM

- I believe God is disappointed with our actions here on earth, Lin - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2017 3:45:00 PM

This is such a powerful poem! Very well expressed. It really reaches the reader :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2017 4:19:00 PM

- My thoughts go to the coming generations that get handed a broken nature, Heidi - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2017 3:35:00 PM

I feel the pain you depicted about how everything has gone wrong, Anne Lise! You are right a sad song cannot explain.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2017 4:10:00 PM

- The nature becomes destroyed ... bit by bit - We are obliged to take care of nature, Vijay - When we also get global warming it will be a dangerous mix - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2017 3:00:00 PM

you chose a fabulous poem to inspire you Anne Lise I read Ravi's poem it was very powerful indeed:-)we need to unite to stop the destruction of our beautiful world:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2017 4:00:00 PM

- I'm afraid it's too late, Jan - Is there a future for our children and grandchildren ? - Ravi's poem gave us something to think about - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)