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Åukasz PoÅ?lad - Infanticide- deeply disturbing in so many ways. In ritual abuse victims must take vows to never speak of the cult for fear of death or torture.:

The spirit that remembers the taste of blood is cold and fearless Lift your head up, set sail to the top ride high waves, exceed climax Liars - Death Penalty - Losers Knock the nickel nail in the coffin High tide, rising toxic ... turbo tempo Rugged, round stones at the bottom, slippery with long rubber boots Brutally raped, broken - no virgin anymore She carries her own cross, weak and weary A secret place, buried in a rusty box Woven deep in the ground, gaunt soil Sleep safe with your mouth closed, not a beep Under four eyes, an external promise - an oath Frail and disappointment, without mercy No rest, restart ... move on Can you forgive poisonous words and perv actions May your conscience burn brave and blue 26.03.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Alliteration poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest Poem of the Day : 28.03.2018

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Susan Mills

Date: 4/24/2018 2:19:00 PM

enlightening poem. One of my favorites. Congratulations.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/20/2018 9:29:00 PM

Awesome write you got here. Is it about anyone you know? I hope you put it in contest. Because it's a winner :)

James Inman

Date: 4/20/2018 8:37:00 PM

A deeply moving piece Anne-Lise.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/20/2018 6:49:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, a very sad poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs.

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/20/2018 4:09:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win!! I am not surprised at all by this. This is most excellent Alliteration poem with a very forceful message as I alluded to in my earlier comments (below) to you!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2018 9:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sunshine, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2018 2:47:00 AM

- Eve, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 3:49:00 PM

Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/4/2018 2:47:00 AM

- Line, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 4/3/2018 7:48:00 AM

I agree with Judith. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2018 12:17:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S

Date: 4/2/2018 8:04:00 PM

I missed your poem when it first came out so ... belated Congrats on POTD and Congrats on your win in the contest Anne-Lise! Definitely an intensely emotional write... you kept the depth of the feeling while still satisfying the use of alliteration. So well done my sweet friend :) ~Judy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2018 12:52:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations X 2, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/2/2018 6:22:00 PM

Returning with congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your wonderful win with your powerful poem. Warmest wishes..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2018 12:52:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 4/2/2018 4:44:00 PM

"Rugged round stones"...a very sharp and caustic use of Alliteration in this harsh write Sunshine. Very well done

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2018 12:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/1/2018 10:07:00 PM

Many a deep message ... Congratulations on your nice win, Sunshine ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2018 5:12:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 4/1/2018 2:57:00 PM

A disturbing poem on horrific events no one should suffer from... Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2018 3:33:00 PM

- Thanks so much S.O., you honor me my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/1/2018 9:14:00 AM

A deep write, Anne-lise, congratulations on this being honoured as POTD:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2018 11:41:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/30/2018 10:01:00 AM

Powerful poem Anne-Lise, keep on fighting the good fight;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2018 11:13:00 AM

- I always do, Keith :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2018 3:27:00 PM

Absolutely alarm-raising alliterative attack-mode assault, Anne-Lise! Congrats on POTD. :) Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2018 8:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/28/2018 6:47:00 PM

Congrats Anne on your magnificent poem... Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2018 7:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2018 6:32:00 PM

Powerful write Anne...Congrats on POTD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2018 7:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/28/2018 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. an incredible write Anne-lise xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2018 7:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Cooper

Date: 3/28/2018 2:48:00 PM

awesome write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 2:49:00 PM

- I thank you most warmly, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/28/2018 2:07:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, An extraordinarily well-done alliteration poem. (I think you may have the contest winner with this one!!) Congratulations too on the POTD honor. The four stanzas of your poem with the very descriptive imagery paint a most compelling picture of the salient details of the "evil deeds" at hand. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 2:20:00 PM

- Nice to see you, Gary - Thank you for encouraging words and congratulations - Especially thanks for yours fav. :) - Happy Easter to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/28/2018 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 11:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/28/2018 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Anne Lise. Very thought provoking write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 11:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/28/2018 8:22:00 AM

Your deep and dark poetic lines speak powerfully of courage and truth Anne-Lise, expressed with beautifully harrowing and intriguing imagery. In your last two lines I see the potential for great resilient strength.. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 8:30:00 AM

- Thank you for a wonderful and detailed comment and congrats, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/28/2018 7:48:00 AM

Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on POTD!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2018 7:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)