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- Evil Deeds -

The spirit that remembers the taste of blood
                                          is cold and fearless
                               Lift your head up, set sail to the top
                                  ride high waves, exceed climax
                                    Liars - Death Penalty - Losers
                                 Knock the nickel nail in the coffin
        
                               High tide, rising toxic ... turbo tempo 
                                Rugged, round stones at the bottom,
                                     slippery with long rubber boots

                             Brutally raped, broken - no virgin anymore
                             She carries her own cross, weak and weary 
                                  A secret place, buried in a rusty box 
                                 Woven deep in the ground, gaunt soil
                                      
                           Sleep safe with your mouth closed, not a beep
                          Under four eyes, an external promise - an oath
                               Frail and disappointment, without mercy
                                       No rest, restart ... move on
                         Can you forgive poisonous words and perv actions
                               May your conscience burn brave and blue 
                                    












26.03.2018
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Alliteration poem - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest


Poem of the Day : 28.03.2018

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2018

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Susan Mills Date: 4/24/2018 2:19:00 PM enlightening poem. One of my favorites. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/20/2018 9:29:00 PM Awesome write you got here. Is it about anyone you know? I hope you put it in contest. Because it's a winner :) Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 4/20/2018 8:37:00 PM A deeply moving piece Anne-Lise. Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/20/2018 6:49:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, a very sad poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs. Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 4/20/2018 4:09:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win!! I am not surprised at all by this. This is most excellent Alliteration poem with a very forceful message as I alluded to in my earlier comments (below) to you!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/3/2018 9:45:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Sunshine, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/4/2018 2:47:00 AM - Eve, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier Date: 4/3/2018 3:49:00 PM Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/4/2018 2:47:00 AM - Line, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George Date: 4/3/2018 7:48:00 AM I agree with Judith. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2018 12:17:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S Date: 4/2/2018 8:04:00 PM I missed your poem when it first came out so ... belated Congrats on POTD and Congrats on your win in the contest Anne-Lise! Definitely an intensely emotional write... you kept the depth of the feeling while still satisfying the use of alliteration. So well done my sweet friend :) ~Judy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2018 12:52:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations X 2, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley Date: 4/2/2018 6:22:00 PM Returning with congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your wonderful win with your powerful poem. Warmest wishes.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2018 12:52:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless Date: 4/2/2018 4:44:00 PM "Rugged round stones"...a very sharp and caustic use of Alliteration in this harsh write Sunshine. Very well done Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2018 12:51:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta Date: 4/1/2018 10:07:00 PM Many a deep message ... Congratulations on your nice win, Sunshine ... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/2/2018 5:12:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 4/1/2018 2:57:00 PM A disturbing poem on horrific events no one should suffer from... Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 3:33:00 PM - Thanks so much S.O., you honor me my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/1/2018 9:14:00 AM A deep write, Anne-lise, congratulations on this being honoured as POTD:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 11:41:00 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 3/30/2018 10:01:00 AM Powerful poem Anne-Lise, keep on fighting the good fight;-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2018 11:13:00 AM - I always do, Keith :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/29/2018 3:27:00 PM Absolutely alarm-raising alliterative attack-mode assault, Anne-Lise! Congrats on POTD. :) Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2018 8:07:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing Date: 3/28/2018 6:47:00 PM Congrats Anne on your magnificent poem... Hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2018 7:08:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 3/28/2018 6:32:00 PM Powerful write Anne...Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2018 7:07:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 3/28/2018 3:37:00 PM Congratulations on your POTD. an incredible write Anne-lise xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2018 7:07:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Cooper Date: 3/28/2018 2:48:00 PM awesome write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 2:49:00 PM - I thank you most warmly, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 3/28/2018 2:07:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, An extraordinarily well-done alliteration poem. (I think you may have the contest winner with this one!!) Congratulations too on the POTD honor. The four stanzas of your poem with the very descriptive imagery paint a most compelling picture of the salient details of the "evil deeds" at hand. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 2:20:00 PM - Nice to see you, Gary - Thank you for encouraging words and congratulations - Especially thanks for yours fav. :) - Happy Easter to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 3/28/2018 11:07:00 AM Congratulations!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 11:42:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 3/28/2018 10:48:00 AM Congratulations on POTD Anne Lise. Very thought provoking write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 11:45:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley Date: 3/28/2018 8:22:00 AM Your deep and dark poetic lines speak powerfully of courage and truth Anne-Lise, expressed with beautifully harrowing and intriguing imagery. In your last two lines I see the potential for great resilient strength.. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 8:30:00 AM - Thank you for a wonderful and detailed comment and congrats, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe Date: 3/28/2018 7:48:00 AM Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2018 7:52:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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