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- Everybody Knows Jack -

Poor old Jack he was not so quick But still he had some more tricks A charmer he once was But from the ladies he did not get applause - "Oh My God" ... you remind me of Santa Claus 22.04.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - My first Limerick ...... ( sorry Jack :))

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Robert Johnson

Date: 5/9/2015 12:19:00 PM

A lot of people think that I don't know Jack. :) They're quick to stick a knife in my back. But you have shown what sweetness is. Maybe it's time to give them the biz. :) Thanks for stopping by Anne Lise.

Stefan Maxima

Date: 5/8/2015 2:28:00 PM

Nice poem !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2015 2:33:00 PM

- A "poor" limerick Stefan, but if you know Jack it will give you a smile :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2015 1:02:00 PM

Ah, "quick" in a different sense! Lots of great humor here, Anne-Lise. You could enter it in Jan's contest. Limericks are among my favorite forms. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/27/2015 1:11:00 PM

- Second and fifth line does not rhyme ..... But thanks, dear Carolyn :) - (I quit to post contests .... tired of "friends club winners" :) - Nice to see you, hope everything is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/25/2015 11:10:00 PM

A nice poem excellently expressed. Again, 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2015 4:49:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments, my friend Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/25/2015 3:32:00 PM

Very nice limerick Anne...best wishes....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2015 4:21:00 PM

- Thanks for the S-mail Joseph ........... it's ok .... no contest limerick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/25/2015 8:19:00 AM

How will I convince myself that it's really your first limerick my very dear friend, Anne Lise? It's a perfect one and you did it very well, giving me smiles. So happy to read it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your lovely words on my latest poem. Have a very beautiful and blessed weekend! love lots and many lovely hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2015 10:42:00 AM

- Yes, my first ..... nice that you like it, dear friend Leonora - I also wish you a beautiful weekend - thanks for a "smiling" comments and visit - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/24/2015 4:06:00 PM

If Jack could read this he would love it too! I wouldn't have known it was your first try if you hadn't said.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 4:40:00 PM

- I believe he liked it :)) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/24/2015 10:48:00 AM

LOLOLOL...This was cute and perfect for Jack.! Not bad for a first try Anne Lise. ~Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 4:41:00 PM

- Janet, thanks for visiting, smiles and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 4/24/2015 10:22:00 AM

Very nice words dear Anne :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 11:21:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Fatima :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/24/2015 8:17:00 AM

That's a cute one...Jack has certainly been through it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 11:21:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, M. L .:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/23/2015 7:01:00 PM

smiling anne lise santa the kids will love him lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 2:46:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2015 1:16:00 PM

Poor Jack.. Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 1:46:00 PM

...... It's never too late :))) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nandita Das

Date: 4/23/2015 7:32:00 AM

A nice limerick. Funny too. Can't believe this is your first.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:19:00 AM

- Thanks .... Yes, my first ..... and certainly long until the next ...... - Enjoyable that you like it, Nandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/23/2015 6:59:00 AM

Awww! Dear Anne Lise! You are so sweet! I apologize for not visiting... honestly! I've said this before but I want everyone to know, you were the very first to respond to my poetry and I have never forgotten you, my dearest friend! I'm truly sorry! All I can say is, there's too much on my plate! Love, Santa Jack xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:20:00 AM

- I do the best I can :))) - Thanks :)))

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/23/2015 8:15:00 AM

You should never apologize for your knowledge of english! You write exceptionally well, my dear Anne-Lise! Loving hugs, Jack xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:10:00 AM

..... Santa Jack himself ..... I have released him out to the spring sunshine :))) - Nice that you enjoyed my Limerick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/23/2015 5:29:00 AM

Oh wow...haha. He is our Jack all right. Who said you can't write lims, Anne? Welcome to the club! Hugs! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:12:00 AM

- Me myself I !!! - Thanks for visiting, smiles and comments Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/23/2015 2:18:00 AM

Ha ha ... and his name is Jack, my grandaddy :)) well done, Anne Lise ..He surely loves it! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 3:22:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting, smiles and comments Aiyah :) - No worries ..... Jack does not read my poems anyway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/22/2015 4:17:00 PM

hahaha aww thats clever

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 3:28:00 AM

- My first Limerick, Casarah ...... I find it hard to make it fun with English words :) - Thanks for visiting, smiles and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)