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06.03.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Each passing cloud Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul
3rd place in the contest

The wind creates clouds in all shapes and sizes Lying on the grass with memories from childhood As sweet thoughts in a dream a little girl in summer shoes Never forgot you just lost sight of you a few times Clouds slide past the eyes and form impermanent figures No one gets too adult to play with the imagination With thoughts and goodwill where the happiest moments occur The puzzle pieces fall into place and one knows in a wonderful way that we are a atomic grain of dust in a larger context With these memories my mind heals - the clouds slide on

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2023 11:01:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I enjoyed it again. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2023 1:53:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/14/2023 1:39:00 AM

Memories come and go as clouds 'slide on' Wonderful write Anne, hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 2:47:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/12/2023 6:32:00 AM

A beautiful reminiscence of childhood. Watching clouds change shape and change into animals was a past time many children enjoyed, Imagination and wonder.. Creates wonderful memories/ Such a lovely poem Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 2:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Wendy :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2023 4:12:00 AM

"The puzzle pieces fall into place and one knows in a wonderful way that we are a atomic grain of dust" .... Profound thoughts on sighting the passing clouds. A great entry, Smile. All the Best! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 2:46:00 AM

- Valsa, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/8/2023 4:09:00 AM

Beautiful musings of pristine innocence ~ good luck in the contest, Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2023 2:46:00 AM

- Thank you very much, U.S. :) - hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 3/7/2023 9:26:00 AM

What a deeper picture. Beautifully done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2023 1:35:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Paige :) - hugs

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/6/2023 12:32:00 PM

Such a peace filled and reflective write Glad to have spent time here.'

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2023 2:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/6/2023 11:14:00 AM

Very pleasant and peaceful, this poem of reminiscence is inspiring. Best wishes for the contest. :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 11:53:00 AM

- Nice to hear that you find it inspiring, Evelyn ... many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2023 10:20:00 AM

Love your verse. When I was little around 8 and up I use to lie on the front yard and just watch the clouds, it really gave me comfort. I still do sometimes not lie , but just stand and look up to watch the scene. Hugs my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 11:51:00 AM

- Easy to lie down ... difficult to get up again :))) - But standing or sitting is fine ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/6/2023 6:42:00 AM

Beautifully reflective, Anne-Lise: in those instances, when each of the parts of the jigsaw come together, that's when you know you're living your best life. GL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 11:49:00 AM

- Truth in your words, Las ... thank you very much :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2023 6:31:00 AM

A wonderful cloud write/picture. A few years ago I saw your picture. At the time I had no way to take a picture. I have seen a few more since that time. Have a wonderful day watching the clouds go by...........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 11:47:00 AM

- New pictures coming, Paula - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/6/2023 5:44:00 AM

Wonderfully reminiscing, Anne-Lise: where the happiest moments occur--- the puzzle pieces fall into place...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 6:30:00 AM

- Universes make it clear that I am so tiny... it's unbelievable... many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs