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When summer comes ..... I want to swim naked in the lake and I want you to be with me ....... come and join ... it is delicious ........... 18.03.2013 A-L Andresen :) - I was given a challenge: * A poem in only 25 words - Use the words: * Summer - Naked - Delicious * like it / not like it :)

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Date: 6/3/2013 11:56:00 AM
I like to swim also and glad summer is near. Very nice poem
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Date: 6/3/2013 11:59:00 AM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Arturo. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/21/2013 11:03:00 PM
Summertime is awesome. Suit yourself, but I won't intrude. :DD Besides, I'm a 15 year-old boy. (: Nicely written poem !!!
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:33:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2013 5:03:00 PM
Very good, I think you rocked that one.
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Date: 4/13/2013 4:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Terry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2013 5:12:00 PM
Nice! Delicious indeed!
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Date: 4/12/2013 2:15:00 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Jennifer, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2013 10:04:00 AM
Nice job with that challenge. The feel of freedom to it. Only did this once - then we got married. love, Kathy
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Date: 3/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Kathryn, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2013 1:31:00 PM
So sweet Anne, but as I'm a Little shy I prefer moon-full summer night hhhh
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:26:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Sallam, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2013 10:32:00 AM
I did not fall out of my chair when I read this Anne, but it was all I could do to stay put. I love it
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Date: 3/25/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Donald, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2013 4:52:00 AM
This is another fantastic and unique write of yours which I enjoyed reading this afternoon my dear friend Anne Lise! I love it! How I wish I know how to swim not in a back stroke so that i can join you ;)). Thank you so much for sharing another gems of yours. Have a blessed Palm Sunday! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/24/2013 5:13:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Leonora, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2013 4:01:00 PM
Hi AnneLise; You wrote this on my B day. It is good, I could not swim naked or otherwise. I don't know how to smim. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:04:00 PM
- I'll teach you to swim - Happy Birthday Lucilla! - Enjoyable with a visit from you, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2013 1:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by my poems. I LIKE IT..and swimming naked is wonderful! Light & Love
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Date: 3/22/2013 1:28:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Debbie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2013 10:09:00 AM
You certainly used the words wonderfully for this prompt. I haven't swam naked in, never! Maybe I should give it a try. Sounds delicious. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Connie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2013 10:08:00 AM
Great use of the challenging words..Enjoyed reading this one..I bet that water is very cold though..Thanks for stopping by..Spring is around a corner..We are having the pollen here with first cold then very warm weather..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Sara, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2013 9:49:00 AM
With the right person.....nice write! Thanks for your comments....xx Holly Moore
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:10:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Holly, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2013 9:34:00 PM
Always did enjoy skinny dipping...
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Date: 3/22/2013 3:09:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Donna, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2013 2:04:00 PM
wow lol this challenge was met head on and you nailed it spot on.
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Date: 3/21/2013 2:48:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Lisa, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2013 9:44:00 AM
I've never tried this... but you make it sound like quite the treat ;) I wonder, were this poem a bit longer, how things would progress... lol!
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Date: 3/21/2013 9:48:00 AM
...me too.... Enjoyable with a visit from you Timothy, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2013 4:08:00 AM
sounds tempting babe...is the water icy:)
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Date: 3/21/2013 7:23:00 AM
..... hot!!!!- (in summer time) -Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend Don! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2013 6:10:00 AM
Sounds "delicious", Anne-Lise :). Very tempting. I might just join you, lol. Great one!
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Date: 3/20/2013 12:48:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend Toquyen! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 1:52:00 PM
I'm already there!!!...haha. Enjoyed this Anne!
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Date: 3/19/2013 1:59:00 PM
..... little cold yet .... here it is minus degrees and snow! - I'm waiting until the summer comes, Caleb. - Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 10:41:00 AM
Wishing for warmer weather - I liked it =)
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:41:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend Ann! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 9:37:00 AM
Aww... Anne Lise.. you drew me an awe...what an awesome invitation.. let me swim with you..such delicious ...<3 <3 <3 luv you much my dearest poetess <3 <3 <3
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:30:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments my friend Sukmawati! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 9:19:00 AM
I would love to join, Anne-Lise, being naked is fine with me :) Jag
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:29:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments Jag! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 9:04:00 AM
yes, I want to join you my dear friend anne Lise...so refreshing....so like it!!I want that to relax my body from a busy semester...wait for me...Love/Hugs, Maria (^_^) Always grateful for your kind visit on my poems...and for that....two thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments sweet Maria! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2013 3:37:00 AM
Anne-Lise would love to join you but I can't swim, love the poem though....David
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Date: 3/19/2013 3:50:00 AM
- You have to take a swimming course, there is some time before the summer comes David. - Thanks for your visit and your comments! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2013 7:30:00 PM
Like it! A lot! Jack
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Date: 3/19/2013 3:48:00 AM
- Thanks for your visit and your comments Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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