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Dentures in a glass of water mouthful: Hungry little boy gobbling down a slice of tasty chocolate cake with his mouth open wide for a mouthful as he sits at a table in a restaurant Stock Photo

Grandfathers teeth are strange, says Jimmy who is five years They come out of his mouth at night He looked quite stunned and shocked Of all things ... he gets a little scared for what could happen With his mouth full of chocolate A-L Andresen 15.06.2015 :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/12/2015 5:01:00 PM

So very cute my friend xxxxx :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2015 2:30:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Debbie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/3/2015 2:38:00 PM

Wow! grandfather's smile filled his mouth is like full of chocos at night. Chocos brings smile always. Beutifully imagined this sweet serious thought. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2015 3:46:00 PM

- Dear friend Bl, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/27/2015 4:07:00 PM

Had me chuckling-cute one. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 4:59:00 PM

- A small smile written for fun, dear Phyllis :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2015 3:16:00 PM

Cute one ..I got a chuckle with reading this..I wonder what he did with that mouth full of chocolate..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2015 3:37:00 PM

- Sara, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/19/2015 9:13:00 AM

ohh, sounds like a cute Halloween, anne... hope you are having some chocos this cool Friday!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 11:41:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/18/2015 10:40:00 PM

Hilarious!! :D Love this! 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2015 2:21:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/17/2015 4:52:00 PM

ha ha dear pal lol my dad has no teeth and he always scares the kids when he takes them out excellent pen anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2015 2:50:00 AM

- A smile without teeth ...... scary :))) - Thanks for visiting and comments, my friend Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/17/2015 2:25:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise Dear One . . . Well, I'm nearly "64" now and still love chocolate and candy as I did as a child. But I do understand the seriousness of this for a child. (I guess I didn't pay attention so much to my parents on this one.) BTW, I still have all of my teeth too!! Enjoyed this one much!! A Big "7" from me covered in Chocolate Syrup -- HA HA!! Best!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 2:39:00 PM

- I love chocolate me too, but eat less than before - My teeth placed on the bedside table at night, where they smile at me :))) - NO I LIE, I'VE STILL MY TEETH IN YOUR MOUTH :)))) - Thanks for the nice, sweet and lovely comments .... and the big 7, dear Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/17/2015 1:33:00 PM

This is food for thought, Anne Lise, even for young children:) A sweet and delightful poem! Hugs /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 1:37:00 PM

- Serious and scary for a child :) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/16/2015 10:44:00 PM

Charming verse, Anne-Lise. Reminds me of the poem 'I wish I'd looked after my teeth' by British Poet Pam Ayres. Check it out sometime. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 3:41:00 AM

- Viv, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2015 8:51:00 PM

Anne-Lise, this is delightful, 7 I recall being frightened as a child by my toothless great grandmother, I just knew something was terribly wrong and thanks for visiting my poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 4:30:00 AM

- Scary for a child :) - B.W., thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2015 4:54:00 PM

hahaha. from the mouth of babes!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 6:47:00 AM

- Andrea, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/16/2015 3:15:00 PM

Lol!!!!!! A very very funny piece, thanks for shared.........A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 3:40:00 AM

- Afolabi, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/16/2015 2:17:00 PM

Very nice pen Anne Lise! Very cute deep serious thoughts and poem my very dear friend.It made me smile:) I enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 3:39:00 AM

- Dorian, thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/16/2015 7:27:00 AM

Simply Beautiful, Short and sweet.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/17/2015 3:38:00 AM

- Milton, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 6/15/2015 11:12:00 PM

An uplifting write Anne...Enjoyed the read!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:32:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Ken - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/15/2015 9:52:00 PM

lol...wonderful write Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:31:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Joseph - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 9:26:00 PM

A delightful write, Anne-Lise! Made me chuckle. Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:31:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Kim - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/15/2015 2:59:00 PM

aww, yeah that could really shock a child, hope he brushes after that chocolate... Big :) Smiles :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:29:00 AM

- I hope so too :) - Thank you for visiting and comments, Casarah - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/15/2015 2:44:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise: I really enjoyed that (HAHA)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Ralph - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2015 2:39:00 PM

:) Oh dear....children and the things they worry about, Sunshine. Cute! Sending hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Serious and scary for a child :) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Eileen - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/15/2015 2:07:00 PM

ha ha ha - love it Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2015 3:26:00 AM

- Thanks for visit a 7 and comments, Jan :) - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)