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Wow..it truly is up to us to live every day as if it is a gift and find a way to make it memorable.Do something nice for someone, eat  at your favorite place, watch and old/new movie..it doesn't take a lot.  One only has to focus on the positive.

- Deep Breath -

When change does not delight
Life is constantly changing
We know it involves both pain and joy

It's when the day lights up
The awareness of the key
which opens the hearts of others

Be real instead of perfect
I can not stop the wind,
but I can teach myself to sail with 

The smell of flowering bushes and trees
Meet the changes of life without worry
One thing is for sure ... that nothing is certain

The direction of life, what you want in your heart
By the power you carry within you, the seeds of the future
A starting point for new experiences











10.05.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile,your poem is filled a message for anyone that needs it. The message is very clear. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:57:00 AM
Sorry I'm so late with the praise Anne-Lise,, well done and congratulations...
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Date: 5/16/2018 12:10:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2018 9:36:00 AM
Anne-Lise, my belated congratulations on your POTD honor for this very uplifting and inspirational poem! Well done! Sandra :)
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Date: 5/14/2018 1:32:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/14/2018 5:01:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD Anne-Lise, thoroughly enjoyed reading, so well written. :))
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Date: 5/14/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2018 8:46:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! Congratulations on the POTD honor. The words of "Deep Breath" are all-important and very well-said. Most Excellent for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2018 3:28:00 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD ! My friend...very well crafted...stay in the light...WW
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2018 2:39:00 AM
Very true and well written.My wife taught me that only imperfection is 'perfect'.
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2018 1:38:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you for your fine victory dearest, Anne-Lise. A well- deserved POTD.
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:33:00 AM
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Date: 5/12/2018 9:25:00 PM
I love the meaningful title your gave to your inspiring and deeply introspective poem, Anne-Lise. This is a beautiful write of wisdom and acceptance. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:33:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 5:31:00 PM
Wonderful piece! Smile inducing wisdom lovely! Congrats on potd! xomo!
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:32:00 AM
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Date: 5/12/2018 1:43:00 PM
very well penned, loved it, well deserved POTD, many thanks :) x
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 1:41:00 PM
When we face life with an open mind then we are able to make the key decisions for which our lives are shaped. Congratulations on T.P.O.D. an inspiring read.Jack2
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 1:31:00 PM
Meeting the changes of life positively...Congrats on POTD Anne
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 11:32:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations on POTD sweet Anne Lise. So beautifully penned:)
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 10:53:00 AM
So inspirational! Thank you. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:37:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 10:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I loved the lines, " I cannot stop the wind, but I can teach myself to sail ..." beautifully penned and deserving of POTD
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:37:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 10:06:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your poem, Anne-Lise..
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:36:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 9:44:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is so positive and true. Congratulations on the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 7:27:00 AM
Beautifully done my dear friend Anne-Lise...Congrats!!! on your POTD!...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 7:24:00 AM
What an inspiring write, Anne-Lise, I will ponder these thoughts today. Congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:42:00 AM
Back with congrats Anne-Lise on POTD.
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:34:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 6:24:00 AM
Your insight is reality, Anne-Lise. Beautifully written.
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:34:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 5:48:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful poem! "Be real instead of perfect I can not stop the wind, but I can teach myself to sail with " ultimate realization..... Thanks for sharing And many congratulations for POTD for this very well deserved poem!
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:33:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Ashok :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 4:54:00 AM
A poem of such wisdom in every line and thought. Be real instead of perfect - truth and deep insight Ann-Lise. A wonderful poem that deserves to be POTD. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:33:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2018 3:42:00 AM
A profound poem with great words of wisdom.The ship is ours to control, we just have to learn or relearn how to steer it no matter how the wind blows. A beautiful pick for POTD, congratulations Anne-Lise.....Maria xxx
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:31:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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