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- Comfortably Numb Feelings -

Oh now sad frog located on the sandy beach Emotions raging around the body as an Icelandic volcano burning holds in a vice grips deeply Stranded in the cemetery of broken hearts It is as if parts of the heart where torn out shreaded from the body without an anesthesia Deep arrow strikes in Golden Sunshine beams Maybe he worry for no reason Warm thoughts sail faraway yonder An endless sandy beach, white as snow washed with the blue ocean in brilliant yellow sunlight Singing dreams kissing lips hold an oasis close She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough In the hot summer sun burning heart yearns It does not matter what it is or where it leads them as long as it creates an inner glow Singing sizzles relighting loves croaking flames Infatuation may be coming - but volatile ignites when paper lips hold tears prisoner Positively resonated does not appear out of the blue Falling salt seasoned spice Trail seeking light This is a powerful and invigorating moment Jumping angry to paradise Shedding the green shirt of a Queen She was cold, but the sun stroked her soft and warm over the cheeks Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 26.06.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/10/2015 1:20:00 PM

Warmth of love expressed beautifully. Nice collab my lovely lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2015 2:23:00 PM

- Thanks my friend Bl, for visiting a 7 and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/6/2015 10:18:00 AM

Very artistic and creative Anne Lise and Liam. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2015 11:40:00 AM

- Thanks dear Phyllis, for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 7/2/2015 10:34:00 AM

Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2015 10:56:00 AM

- Funom, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/29/2015 7:31:00 AM

Anne Lise and Liam, cute poem and story!!! lovely!!! descriptive that you bring me there..! hugs and hugs!!~Olive Eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2015 10:47:00 AM

- Thanks Olive, for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/28/2015 10:19:00 PM

A unique story of love the two of you have written here. Very creative work, Anne-Lise and Liam! Wonderful imagery!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2015 10:48:00 AM

- Hi Kelly, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/28/2015 6:51:00 PM

lost within your lines Anne Lise and Liam delightful poem hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2015 10:46:00 AM

- Shadow, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/28/2015 4:31:00 PM

"She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough" Nice line! You two have achieved much with your collaboration! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2015 10:45:00 AM

- Matthew, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 6/28/2015 1:54:00 PM

Anne,there is something that glows and flows about this poem. It is BEAUTY...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 2:15:00 PM

- I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem, Ndaba - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/28/2015 1:54:00 PM

A powerful, emotive write and another awesome collab! She was cold but the sun stroked her - love that line! We're you inspired by the song, Comfortably Numb, for the title?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 2:03:00 PM

- No dear Rhonda, I was "comfortably numb" :))) ..... sometimes Liam gives me some lines, which gives me that feeling :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2015 1:30:00 PM

what an interesting title this one has and also interesting imagery. It's a very descriptive poem you two came up with. Good job~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 1:41:00 PM

- It is often the title of the poem that "catches my interest" .... not "who" has written it - I read and comments "all" different poems, it is always exciting :) - You can find a "golden pearl" ... or more :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/28/2015 11:16:00 AM

lovely thoughts here, as always, Anne. Hope you're having a great weekend. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 1:28:00 PM

- Kim, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/28/2015 10:21:00 AM

you and liam are a superb team, anne.. this is so heartwarming and full of deep sentiment.. really fine read this sunday.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 1:28:00 PM

- Nette, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/28/2015 3:14:00 AM

Lovely collaboration, works so well. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 1:28:00 PM

- Viv, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/28/2015 3:05:00 AM

A stunning write painted with emotion and vivid imagery. I enjoy this piece and thanks for this great collaboration, excellent write for both...........A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/28/2015 1:27:00 PM

- Afolabi, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/26/2015 11:43:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautifully written free verse poem by you my dearest friends.I sense a lot of sadness in this excellent piece,but well that could be only me and my own personal interpretation of it.Great imagery.Just dazzling.A very beautiful n' amazing poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!Awesome collaboration!Enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each of you!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!Keep your faith Liam!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 7:37:00 AM

- Thanks Dorian, for visiting a 7 and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2015 5:38:00 PM

Interesting collaboration going on here..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/27/2015 7:35:00 AM

- Sara, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/26/2015 1:23:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a beautifully penned poem, you both did a terrific job writing it, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, not that long ago, my grandma was able to work and did not neglect her children but yes many working women did and still do, my own Mom did not work until we were all in school all day and she was home when we got home from school

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2015 1:28:00 PM

- A safety for children that someone is at home when they come from school :) - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments B.W. - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/26/2015 10:19:00 AM

the poor old frog is always croaking smiling anne lise this was a fun write your input sang this to a whole new level wishing you pal a wonderful weekend and also thank you gary and tom for the heartfelt wonderful comments

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2015 10:58:00 AM

- Smile and pleasure to write with you, dear Liam :))) - A beautiful weekend for you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/26/2015 8:26:00 AM

Anne-Lise Dear One!! Now you know by now, I think, that "Froggy Poems" are among my favorite!! (Liam and I did a couple of froggy subject co-writes last year that were much fun . . . smile!!) The imagery and storyline here are great. And I'm glad that at the last "Froggy" gets here cold cheeks warmly and softly stroked by the sun. Enjoyed this one. A great free verse write. A "7" + FAV!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2015 8:42:00 AM

- I was not "completely safe" in this area :)))) - I'm glad you liked it, dear friend Gary - Thanks for visiting, a seven - and especially your "fav." - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)