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29.09.2024
Anne-Lise Andresen
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In a brief retrospective with melancholy eyes September with the dominant color, under the leaf falling moon Never forget the smell of spring and flowering a freshness of love The sleeping earth of winter waking up under the sun warm kisses - never too early His rain-washed face and cool breaths in autumn weather Season of mists fades in the west - brooding over death

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/25/2024 1:03:00 PM

Anne, the title invited me to read your poem Anne Lise and it didn't disappoint... contrasting mood which further highlights the ending being cold, chilly.. :) , Olive

Jan Allison

Date: 11/1/2024 3:01:00 AM

such a heartfelt piece Anne-Lise, the final stanza brought a lump to my throat, adding this gem to my faves for SO many reasons, hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2024 11:02:00 AM

Very atmospheric I see a contrast in it. Beginnings vs endings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2024 8:00:00 AM

An encouraging amidst grief! Enjoyed ver much!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/18/2024 7:47:00 PM

A gorgeous poem, which conveys the cool charms of fall! Love the imagery and the picture, too. Nice work, Anne-Lise.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2024 5:33:00 AM

This is so beautiful, dear Anne Lise. Great imagery that makes this poem so enjoyable. Hugs.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 10/7/2024 4:19:00 AM

This is such an awesome piece many blessings Anne-Lise simply stunning work

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/5/2024 6:43:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise. Wow, you carried me right along inside these lines and THENi totally sank thru in the last one. I was lying flat on my back & I mean i even felt my chest sink into the mattress! Powerful writing! You never stop with your talented, amazing pen! Love’ya!

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/1/2024 2:45:00 PM

Exquisite writing, Anne-Lise “under the leaf falling moon”. What a fine line! Love this, a fave! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/1/2024 6:49:00 AM

“Leaf falling moon” wow absolutely love that phrase and many more depicting seasons and how time fades as colors reflect melancholy! What a deeply moving and soul stirring poem! You write always so well and paint imagery in such creative manner! Somethings like freshness of spring remains amidst all! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2024 5:30:00 PM

Well done! Lovely! … the dominant color, under the leaf falling moon

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/30/2024 1:00:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem of Autumn's first month. Winter does seem like a time of death. I enjoy these words.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 12:14:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful "Chilly" write with a great picture. We need some rain here. Hope you are OK. Hugs... Have great day................

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/30/2024 10:52:00 AM

Anne-Lise, the way you connect the recent past and the times back even a little further, just gets me thinking about all the variety and beauty of the wonderful world we are blessed to enjoy. You have a great way to get us thinking about loveliness and life. Smiles!!

Jay Narain

Date: 9/30/2024 9:54:00 AM

Nice poem. Remnds us fall is here and winter is coming soon.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/30/2024 8:11:00 AM

This piece really moves in the essence of melancholy and the flow of time ~ I felt so many poignant emotions accompanying your words as my eyes traced the succeeding lines..So incredibly heart-touching and crafted in an eloquent way. I especially love how you've written "under the leaf falling moon", "The sleeping earth of winter waking up under the sun" Such intriguing wordplay throughout. Wonderful to be reading your words after a very long time, coming back here slowly..Sending best wishes!