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Thoughts and words cannot be reconciled In the tunnel I'm locked Echo of mortal words and the footprints of the killer Spiders and hordes of bats Although I am inviolable, death is stronger I can not fight against the power of darkness in this criminal underworld Raw and intense - brutal realities Trapped in my own body Closes my eyes and disappears into my own existence I realize the pitiful truth The sledgehammer hits harder and harder An ice cold, psychopathic killer The head and the heart will so gladly accept this indescribably ruthless pain The past and the future are killed I hope the shadows never find me ____/____ let my soul rest until we meet again 28/01/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Murder in the Tunnel Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 3rd place in the contest

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/22/2021 2:13:00 AM

SUPERB AND SUPERB BEAUTIFUL LOVING POEM

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2021 6:12:00 PM

Oh, a very deep and scary write, my friend. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 2/12/2021 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement. It had me on the edge of my seat, right up until the last line.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/12/2021 9:50:00 AM

Your poem is intensely good Sunshine, who knew you had a dark side lol, congrats on your winning poem, xo

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/12/2021 8:29:00 AM

Back with congratulations Anne Lise, I always felt this one would win the contest, and almost did, really is a great poem, stark and bleak pure poetry, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/12/2021 7:02:00 AM

My goodness Anne-Lise! Love how you closed it out. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/12/2021 6:36:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved. Have a great day- Alexis

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/12/2021 5:51:00 AM

Wow, what a write on psychopathic killer and victim. Congratulations on your premier contest win. Take care Rama. The photo is scary

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/12/2021 4:23:00 AM

Wow! That’s an amazing write! Congrats on your win!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/12/2021 3:37:00 AM

Great poem. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/2/2021 11:57:00 AM

Dark, scary and an excellent poem dear Anne-Lise - wow killing both past and future, what rife imagination, well done sis and good luck. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/30/2021 5:36:00 PM

Great story and pic, Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2021 9:58:00 AM

- Many thanks Angela, for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2021 3:55:00 PM

Interesting and great pic!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2021 9:56:00 AM

- Kim, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/30/2021 3:28:00 PM

The past and the future are both killed, genius analogy of looking towards the openings from within the tunnel, as you lay dying, great vision here Anne-Lise, your a dark horse at heart, brilliant, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2021 9:52:00 AM

- Many thanks David, for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/29/2021 2:46:00 AM

Oh so sad and deep, poignant in narrative. Nice take in the contest. Many times, the soul is not strong enough to fight alone the harsh realities of darkness that surround the world.. Best wishes Anne. Hugs ~ Ani

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2021 9:51:00 AM

- Ani, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2021 9:59:00 PM

Macabre and gruel some, Yet makes for excellent poetry. Good luck in contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:46:00 AM

- Harry, thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/28/2021 12:15:00 PM

This is a superb composition Anne-Lise...I am inspired to do my version.. More power.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:44:00 AM

- Kai, always has challenging contests ... get started with your version, JCB :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/28/2021 11:46:00 AM

An astonishingly powerful and profound poem, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Captivating imagery! Good luck! A fave! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:40:00 AM

- A fave ...it means a lot to me ... :) - Many thanks for your comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/28/2021 11:32:00 AM

A horror poem for sure Anne lise.Well written and good luck in the contest. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:38:00 AM

- Phyllis, thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/28/2021 8:31:00 AM

A gripping free verse thriller Anne-Lise, it certainly made my heart beat fast as the poetic story unfolded. Best wishes ~ Belle:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:37:00 AM

- The dark parts of our world, Belle :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/28/2021 7:46:00 AM

Very original story, Anne Lise. I was help captive by the going-on. Quite a horror story. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:35:00 AM

- A lot of evil in the world, Victor :) - Many thanks for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2021 7:41:00 AM

Very gruesome and Poe like Anne, well written verse. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:34:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2021 7:26:00 AM

WoW! Anne-Lise, You've penned a good take on the contest theme. It was like reading a horror book or watching a horror movie. Was it a ghost trapped in the tunnel? Nevertheless, it was a good write that held my attention from start to finish. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:33:00 AM

- No, not a ghost Alexis ... an evil human ... a psychopathic killer :) - Thank you very much for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/28/2021 7:14:00 AM

WOW! Horror at its best. That picture is going to stick in my head at night for sure, lol! Scary but sad all the same. Great poem,Anne-Lise... best wishes in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:31:00 AM

- When the fear can be read in the face ... :) - Many thanks for your comments, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/28/2021 7:08:00 AM

Deep and intriguing write, Anne-Lise. Those trapped feelings resonate in darkness. I liked the ending as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2021 2:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for your valuable comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)