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whizzing through the grass with sun and wind in her hair - unique vehicle world's rivers are drying up watermelon quenches thirst 10.07.2022 Tanka - 5-7-5-7-7 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/21/2022 2:52:00 AM

refreshing write enjoyed reading this.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/20/2022 1:44:00 PM

This is sooo cool. What a fabulous tanka! Panagiota

Bill Baker

Date: 8/11/2022 3:55:00 PM

Great contest entry, the picture is so inviting and the first three lines tell the story. The last two lines of your Tanka offer a problem and a solution. Both facts. I enjoyed your Tanka. Anne-Lise. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/29/2022 10:16:00 AM

What a cute/fun write. Now I want come cold watermelon. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/20/2022 1:14:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, this is such a wonderful write, It should do well in the contest. I enjoyed reading this one. Held to your usual high standard. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2022 1:14:00 AM

This is a most fitting answer to Vienna's prompt theme, Anne-Lise, so is the accompanying picture! Regards & Hugs // paul

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/15/2022 11:44:00 AM

Nice piece of brevity Anne-Lise, hope you're doing well, blessings and hugs,Gordon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2022 5:40:00 AM

Great imagery and thought-provoking!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2022 4:48:00 PM

Reads like a great contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. If only we could ride a watermelon bike once again. Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/13/2022 12:39:00 PM

Love this picture along with your words Anne Lise. love phyl

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/11/2022 8:34:00 PM

Such a lovely thoughtful write dear Anne... Best wishes in the contest... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/11/2022 4:17:00 PM

There are lovely images throughout this poetic gem, Anne-Lise. Reading it was a treat. Evelyn :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/11/2022 3:21:00 PM

Love your take on the contest theme Anne, and yes watermelon certainly quenches the thirst. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/11/2022 4:19:00 AM

Lovely take on the contest theme. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/10/2022 7:53:00 PM

Oh, yes, love this, so pleased to have you back on board, Anne-Lise. stay well in that beautiful country of yours.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/10/2022 2:44:00 PM

What an excellent written poem, Anne-Line. Your great imagery shed even more charm to this writing and the picture was stunning too. Best wishes in the contest.