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Love is a very strange thing You were born in my arms, the first face you met With joy and pride I gave you your first hug and kiss Grandmother admired you and loved you from the first second Soon eighteen years passed, my love for you is unchanged When you love someone and they don't love you back it feels like the world is ending Love dies because of unrealistic expectations 31.10.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/3/2018 8:29:00 AM
A very nice written poem, yeah it s true that time pass really quickly, we don t even realize when from once being a child, a time come when we are hacing our children and soon when we are waiting to die, it all happens so fast but that s life, secondly a true love never dies, especially a love of parents, siblings, grandparents, they lpve you no matter how bad you are, my mother always tells me that I ll love you forever and tell me that when you ll hace children then you ll know how it feels
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Date: 2/3/2018 8:35:00 AM
- Thanks for meaningful comment, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 3:19:00 PM
Unrequited love is a hard burden to bear for sure ... but the unconditional love you gave comforts all heart ills. A melancholy poem that is so beautifully expressed, Anne-Lise. Very spiritual poem. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:31:00 AM
- Freddie, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2017 10:35:00 AM
It's so very hard to imagine that love every dying, really dying... Well done Anne-Lise.
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Date: 11/4/2017 12:57:00 PM
- "it feels like the world is ending", Charlie - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2017 6:24:00 PM
So very sad. I understand a mother's love and no matter what ... you will continue to love your child. That is what's important ... that rock stays steady and true and hopefully, god-willing, one day they will return. Best, Judy
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Date: 11/4/2017 6:14:00 AM
- This is about a "child" and grandmother relationship, Judith :) - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2017 6:13:00 AM
A heartbreaker! Oh if those kids would realize just how much they’re loved!
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:11:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/2/2017 7:38:00 AM
When somebody loves you should always love them back...Well expressed Anne
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:10:00 AM
- Joseph, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/1/2017 5:07:00 PM
Sorry it ends on a sad note. But it is the sad truth for many who do not strive to keep open the lines of communication! (and it's awful when only one is doing all the work in a child/parent relationship)
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:10:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Andrea - (a child/grandmother relationship) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/1/2017 10:40:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise: A poignant poem you have here. Enjoyed. Trust life has been good to you. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 11/1/2017 12:35:00 PM
- My life has not been a dance of roses, Leon ... but I love roses and life :) - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/1/2017 5:55:00 AM
A bitter truth and you beautifully explained....Great write...
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Supraja - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 8:51:00 PM
This poem was so beautiful and sad. But also seemed to hint at an unconditional love that is unspoken and might save the day!! Excellent write!!
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:19:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Woodrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 8:48:00 PM
So deep and beautiful! Love is a strange and fickle thing...hope you have a great day :)
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:18:00 AM
- Chris, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 7:38:00 PM
A very intimate, emotional and touching write Anne-Lise. Your last line is heartrending..
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 9:32:00 AM
Beautifully touching poetry, Anne-lise:) a parent's love for his/her child never changes, but children, they have all such phases where they literally don't care... it will soon pass:)
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:09:00 PM
- Jo, many thanks for visiting and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 7:12:00 AM
Such a loving start to your poem Anne-Lise! But then your poem takes a turn--heartbreak! Love as it changes so well depicted in these few lines--but there is hope-- the teenagers soon turnaround!
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:09:00 PM
- Vijay, many thanks for visiting and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 6:29:00 AM
Beautifully written in its sadness my friend Anne-Lise, Hope tomorrow will bring out the sun. Much love and hugs...Maria xxx
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Maria - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 5:31:00 AM
After 18 years, the unexpected should be expected unless the unexpected was never expected during that time... You said it,"Love is a very strange thing"
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Date: 10/31/2017 12:07:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2017 4:24:00 AM
The birth of a child is such a precious moment and I had tears of joy reading the first stanza but the second stanza is so heartbreakinlgy sad and gave me a huge lump in my throat Anne Lise:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/31/2017 4:59:00 AM
- Life is like a carousel ... but I get sick of carousels ... - Sometimes you're up and sometimes you're down, and sometimes you just go round and round - Thank you for visiting and sensitive comment, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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