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04.04.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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In the haze of the evening sun Let the wind dry your tears Neptune fork, used wisely on the rough waves Everything we fear and everything we hope for - truce to God At some point the darkness must yield to the light The golden edge of the porcelain plates human ignorance - totally worthless However, the bliss of ignorance is an illusion Hindsight blushing in the afterglow illuminated by a light purple hue A serene sense of peace

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Date: 4/13/2025 7:17:00 AM
Anne-Lise, a lot to think about...human thought and what we don't really know or control. The beginning sets the tone as we can use what's given to us to try to have a life with some value. Hopefully, we are lucky enough. I feel lucky to have made it this far!!! Smiles!!!
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Date: 4/6/2025 5:26:00 AM
Beautifully written. There is hope that even in mistakes, we get hindsight as an afterglow. All the best dear Anne. Hugs!
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Date: 4/4/2025 7:48:00 PM
Inspiring.Wish you the best
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Date: 4/4/2025 6:53:00 PM
This is stunning!! Your imagery and analogies is so artistic and avant-garde!! Great write :)
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Date: 4/4/2025 6:19:00 PM
Somehow it all works out, for the best usually. I learned by trial and big-blunder...but I would have learned far less had I not been foolishly daring. Profound write.
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Date: 4/4/2025 3:47:00 PM
Creative lines and very descriptive. Thanks for sharing them with us. A sense of peace. Sara K
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Date: 4/4/2025 2:25:00 PM
I read several times, letting your meaning soak deeper and deeper into my understanding, and there it did dawn ... beautifully ... CayCay
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Date: 4/4/2025 12:40:00 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous! I love your choice of words and soulful depth of your word weaving here and the way youv written in such an artistic manner along with the picture! Just stunning! I need to do this contest too! Best wishes to you! Sending you light always dear anne lise
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Date: 4/4/2025 12:18:00 PM
A verse that gives you hope. Good luck Anne Lise and have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/4/2025 12:00:00 PM
Loved those final 4 lines! Eventually coming to terms, finding peace. Well, I have to stop writing, but today the muse was helping!! Hugs and happy weekend, dear poet!
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Date: 4/4/2025 11:32:00 AM
Lovely poem and picture Anne, good luck in the contest,have a lovely evening. xx
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